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mayorlight


mayorlight from DeviantArt and Derpibooru; Equestria Girls devotee

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When a disgruntled woman gets a hold of Equestrian magic, Fluttershy and Sugarcoat find themselves under attack by swarms of insects in the park!

A short, quick-paced adventure tale in the vein of superhero comics.

WARNING: If you are scared of insects, you might want to pass on this one!

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Comments ( 10 )

This was a really good little story! I'm glad to see a tale with Fluttershy and Sugarcoat together, they're an interesting pair for sure. :yay:

Part of this very strongly reminded me of the Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Chat Noir series. I could see Lavender Shrub as someone who'd be akumatized by Hawk Moth and all!

This was a fun read. I'd love to see more of these "Superhero Shorts" by mixing and matching character duos. Like a future Fluttershy one can have her stopping a dog fighting ring or something.

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Thank you! I've never watched Miraculous Lady Bug, although I have been curious about that series for a while. I'll admit, when I think of everyday people getting transformed into villains of the week, I tend to think along the lines of Sailor Moon or Mighty Morphin Power Rangers.

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No problem. :pinkiesmile:
Well, admittedly, I haven't seen Miraculous either :twilightsheepish: but I've got friends who are fans of it, so I've become aware of enough about the show to make the comparison with some degree of confidence. XD

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Glad I could deliver another entertaining tale! Fluttershy's geode power offers plenty to explore. I'd always liked to see her deal with not-so-cuddly creatures such as insects. Another scenario I'd considered was an orthros coming through the portal.

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Oh yeah, that would be excellent. Some Equestrian creatures coming through leaked magic or portals. That would definitely be something good for Fluttershy to handle. Especially if it acts vicious toward the others first and she does the same thing as her pony counterpart from the second episode.

Hello, a review for your story has been posted here. I hope you find it helpful.

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Good to know! :twilightsmile:

I think the term is "entomophobia."

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