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Jar Man


Can I put my balls in ya jaws?

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Twilight Sparkle was fiddling with an amulet she found in the Castle of the two sisters. When she drops it, it shatters into pieces causing a fog to blind Ponyville. One by one Ponies disappear, taken by the thing in the fog that makes the sound of another pony to lure others. Twilight barricades herself and Spike inside not wanting to see what was out there until she hears her friends.....

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Well, that certainly is a spooky read!

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Thanks! I came up with it a while ago and decided to write it now

I had wondered when somebody would make a Siren Head story. Very spooky. Well done :twilightsmile:

Siren Head gives me the creeps. O.O

... Meh. Knowing what this is based on, this is WAY too short to do this justice. I couldn't even care what happened to the characters because it's so short.

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Yeah its just a short story not really meant to be long

Sorry for disappointing :fluttercry:

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Just because some people don't like a story doesn't mean it was a mistake to write. Think of it as a step on the road to becoming a better writer. Without this initial step the journey can't start :twilightsmile:

Whaaaaaat the fuuuuuuucck?

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It's pretty fast but yeah, it is a bit spooky.

Good story a lil fast paced but good overall

Once he was on the ground he made a full sprint towards the Everfree Forest to find Zecora. The monster blocked his path to Canterlot, but not to Zecora who should know how to deal with this thing. The air was cold the closer he got to the edge of the forest but Spike didn't think anything of it as he wasn't worried about the air. After a long run he made it to the edge if the Everfree Forest but stopped when a cold chill went up his spine, a bad feeling came over the Dragon and he knew what it was. The monster knew where Spike was or at least knew he wasn't in the castle anymore.

This whole time I was just going "NO NOT THE FOREST THAT'S WHERE SIRENHEAD ALWAYS GOES"

It’s not a horror without dumb characters. Also, there may be some errors.

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