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Dashie04


Your friendly neighborhood writer of entirely too many trans ponies! (Dashie | she/her | Discord: velvetred2004 | pfp by Malphym)

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Jack Daniels feels a bit alone. His marefriend left him, and he’s about ready to give it up. Luckily, the local bar is the remedy for that.

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I’ll be alright, as long as there’s light from a neon moon.

Well, that authors note was unexpected. It certainly must be a really good song, and the references I would say flow perfectly.

I've been in the situation myself, although in the other end. Is a pretty nice, short story, and I'm sure you made the song justice.

There is a typo

Dp you truly

other than that everything flows perfectly.

Very good job!

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Typos, the things I always make when writing a story at midnight.

Thanks for the review.

I tend to go deeper on my recent stories. This link will take you to a blog post, if you care to learn more. It’s not necessary, though.

Before someone says,”Well, that’s why sign language exists,” let me note that it’s possible to not know it. Also, ponies wouldn’t be able to perform sign language as easily.

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