This story is a sequel to Legends of Equestria: The Long Road Back
Rockhoof. Warrior. Dour Scotsman. Engineer unmatched in Equestria. A mighty hero who cannot be trifled with.
However, when the call of war sounds, a conventional Englishman gets swept up in the madness. To say the least... we're doomed!
Another story in the Legends of Equestria continuity. Reading the other stories is strongly recommended; at a bare minimum, you must have read South Swamp Rag and Rocky Road to Hayseed Swamp in order to understand what is going on;
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/452751/legends-of-equestria-south-swamp-rag
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/480157/legends-of-equestria-rocky-road-to-hayseed-swamp
Chapters (15)
Excellent start :3
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Thanks. Anything particularly stand out at the moment?
Now we're talking :3
10692203
Are we? AQbout what, preceisely?
Noice use of the text font size for of the song near the beginning of the chapter. X3
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Thanks. Anything else you wish to note?
Makes ya wonder how loud it was when he crashed through the building and then landing on that hillside. ^^'
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Given that he's absolutely massive, he would make an incredible bang.
Good call for him to write it down.
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'Write'. You used the wrong form.
He shall also have to mark the significance with a linear distance analyser.
10697217
Fixed. :P
10697872
Excellent.
Heh.... I assume that's a reference to of South Swamp Rag's 5th chapter in which that happened? X3
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It wasn't intended as one, but that works.
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Well there wasn't any author's note for the recent chapter this time around btw.
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I didn't feel there was the need for one.
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True. True. :P
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It hardly suits to fill it with random nonsense.
I'm thinking those might need to be done in Italics, given that it does recall what happened in South Swamp Rag. ^^'
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I'll do such a thing, forthwith and speedily. Although, technically, it is the playback of a tape recording.
I agree with Mage Meadowbrook. =3
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Indeed. As we know well, that went rather awkward once.
Heh... you know... I saw that sentence being used as the title of a Fanfic on this website involving Mage Meadowbrook. X3
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It also perfectly sums up her mindset, and indeed the mindset of the entire medical community. Hence organisations such as Medicins sans Frontieres.
That or give it a good number in addition to adding a word. ;3
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State Plan 22, for instance, which was the name for the East German doping program.
Gotta love them preparations though. =3
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There's a lot that needs doing before you launch an offensive.
Heh... you know.... I always picture what that type of Guards look like via in fan art :3
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My mental image for the HSNG is ponified Revolutionary Army uniforms.
Noice touch on making the random noises in the speaker alternating between louder and quieter :3
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Indeed
Heh.... good use of Thor there. ^^
10716593
Indeed, it being his deity.
-sees my story in the Author's note- As of now... it is now in the number one spot for of the featured stories in the Mistmane character tag section! :D
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Though that, sadly, is probably because there are very few Mistmane stories.