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Cromegas_Flare
"To become who you are meant to be. You must first accept your flaws, then make them into your strengths; only then, can you fully be who you are meant to be"
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Holy shit, you're back!
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I hope so. My front is awkward
That magic man has returned!
Cromegas Flare... LIIIIIIIVEEEEES!!!!!
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*Pat's body*
Wait, I do?
This was pretty good; I like your action and pacing. Though, in the second half, this was hampered by how big the paragraphs got. Adding some more space and breaking those (and dialogue) into chunks more should improve the flow.
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Thanks. I will keep that in mind. I have another idea in the works. The series will be called Cursed. I may share some concepts in Discord as I piece the concept together.
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M o r e P l s
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As you wish, my lord.