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AtomicClop


Because "fantasy erotica" sounds better than "cartoon horse porn."

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I'm normally pretty against crossovers but you had me with the explicit "no futa". So... upvoted.

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Thanks! I always appreciate a yay or nay on futa before I click something like this, myself...

This gon be a long burn.

Nice.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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We're obviously AU to both franchises, here, but if "Frozen 1" and "Frozen Fever" took place the summer Elsa was 21 and Anna 18 (as the writers said), this is the next spring, some time before "Frozen 2."

MLP-wise, early Season 3.

Happy to see this up - come for Luna and Elsa, stay for the fluff :twilightsheepish:

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The dark side of Fimfiction is a pathway to many porn some might consider to be... unnatural.

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Fixed! Good eye and big thanks!

Well.

Now we have to see Sunburst and Anna.

Its be rude not to.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Soon! But not immediately. I have at least two I want to publish on my clean account first.

does this contain the song 'let it go'

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Sadly, the website bans all copyrighted song lyrics.

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Even when you put it in the form pictures?

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I don't know, I'm not site staff.

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Ok. I was just curious.
Thanks for reply :)

This is lovely. The chemistry between Luna and Elsa is surprisingly smooth and very well-executed, and I'm finding myself shipping them as you've portrayed their characters. Definitely looking forward to the next chapters.

You know, I only watched Frozen for the first time earlier this year, and Frozen 2 a couple weeks ago, and what struck me the most about the movies were that, in addition to having pretty good stories and hella catchy songs, they were beautiful movies. Ice magic really does have a wonderful aesthetic, and it was blended so well into the movie, to make every character moment pop just that little bit more. I loved how the movie managed to merge emotion and spectacle into a seamless experience, and I find that same expertise here. I can see these scenes in my mind's eye, and I'd like nothing more than to see them brought to life as an actual animation, because the visions you've conjured up with the words are already breathtaking, and accent the character moments so very well.

Goodness, this was an incredible read from start to finish. It is very fine erotica, and I would absolutely love to see more of this blending of worlds. Anna/Sunburst sounds like it could be a lot of fun, and I'd love to see what their dynamics are like as well.

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Hello there, Sledge. I did not expect you to be one to... tread through these dark and mysterious parts of Fimfiction. I see I was mistaken – though this is still the lighter parts of the path we walk on.

Seriously though, didn't expect to receive a notification from you here. :rainbowlaugh:

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Oh, I'm just here 'cause I was present for the brainstorming sessions on the Fimfic discord :twilightsheepish:

But also the fluff.

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Oh really? Only the fluff? :trollestia:


Well then, we part ways here for now, friend. If you have the will, the path out of these accursed parts is thataway. I have stared too long and the Abyss has already claimed me. Escape while you can. Or not. It matters little to me. *insert sound of desolate wind here* :moustache:

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Big thanks, as always! The kind words mean a lot to me.

A minor plot... hole?

Why would Luna be surprised at pubic hair? She observed Anna in the previous chapter. (And from what we've seen of Anna, there is no way she'd shave)

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taps chin

Maybe the spell is more like sonar than a surveillance camera? Or they were missionary and Sunburst's butt was covering that camera angle?

Very nice, am looking forward to a 'Anna and Sunburst' sequel to see how they ended up like that. Really hope at some point Celestia finds out about their little tryst, and what'd she say about it. Maybe it was Celestia's idea to send her there... to let Luna 'loosen' up a bit.

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