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Jaida857


Sometimes I like to write stories

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One stormy night after a study session, Princess Celestia decides to tell her student Twilight Sparkle the story yet to be heard, the story of a hundred nights- the story of the bringing of the sun.


{{ Writing this story got me out of my writers block- it's an idea I'd been playing with for a while, and I finally decided to sit down and just TYPE IT already. I rather like how it turned out }}

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Cute. Very interesting take on things.

Very well done. I could have used a bit more during the story, but extremely well written.

One suggestion I have is to separate the story from the rest of the fic using the horizontal rule, done by writing "hr" in brackets. Since Twilight didn't break in at any point, using the horizontal rule allows you to simply write the story without quotation marks. (Of course, it's all up to personal preference. The way you've written it is perfectly fine.)

Hats off to you, good sir.

So cute and really lovely story. :pinkiehappy:

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