Fashion industry is rough and Suri Polomare knows sometimes a mare have to do what she needs to take what she wants. To get her name in evidence, sometimes she needs to beg. Sometimes she needs somepony naive enough to share their fabric. Sometimes she needs to make an offer nopony could refuse.
One morning, Suri Polomare walks through the door of Spitfire's office.
Written for the May Pairing Contest 2020
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Sorry this needs to be longer or another chapter. The ending leaves me at least wanting a definitive conclusion
Great story but I need more!
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Thanks for letting me Know. Hope you all enjoyed even If it's short :)
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Oh, don't worry about the length. I was really more curious to: A. See Spits in a dress. And B. See what everyone's reaction to it will be.
So, is Spitfire going to find a way out of this, or is Suri going to milk having the captain of the Wonderbolts wrapped around her hoof for all its worth?
great story, but need moar
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agree
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To be honest, I haven't thought about what would happen in the fashion show. My plan was just make a little blackmail tale for the contest.
Makes my heart really warm you all want to see more of it, tho
Won't make any promisses, but I'm considering a chapter 2.
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Ooh, well, whether you decide to do one or not, it's a great story
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Always nice to see underused characters getting recognition. Have a upvote on on me.
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Thanks a lot!
О черт. Несмотря на то что работа закончена мне хотелось бы увидеть продолжение.
Это реально хорошая работа. Она легко читается, умеет хороший сюжет и не теряет персонажей.
Было бы интересно увидеть само шоу, реакцию коллег —как Сури, так и Спитфайр — и окончится ли это тем что Сури будет продолжать использовать лицо Спитфайр?
Oh, shit. Despite the fact that the work is finished, I would like to see the continuation.
This is a really good job. It is easy to read, has a good plot and does not lose characters.
It would be interesting to see the show itself, the reaction of colleagues-both Suri and Spitfire — and whether it will end with Suri continuing to use the Spitfire face?
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This is the first time someone takes their time to leave a comment in both their language and English in one of my stories. Even I can't read a word of Russian, it was a pleasant surprise, so thanks!
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I'm sure Spitfire wouldn't let Suri win so easily and the show would be a mess...