With the help of some whining complaining, a burning crepe, and eyeliner, Rarity convinces Twilight to switch places with her for a while so she can catapult herself onto the royal scene. She discovers that the royal life isn't exactly what she wanted, meanwhile Twilight enjoys her new body a bit more than expected.
Spike, unaware of the swap, decides to make a move on "Rarity". Whelp.
Rated SSS Teen for Sloppy Surrealism, Subtle Sexual innuendo, Some Swapping Shenanigans, Smoking Stallions, Schizophrenic Style, and Singing.
Not a trollfic, just a romantic comedy cowritten with the ghost of David Foster Wallace and edited by my medicine cabinet.
Footnotes are entirely optional if you hate fun.
Chapters (2)
first comment, into the unknown my dear gents
after reading all i have to say is...megh. Like the concept even it is out of character for twilight to do, and would have loved seeing spike hit on twiarity. But so far its rather boring and doesnt flow well with jumps in pacing and speedy character interactions. Hope to see it improve but will hold out on a thumbs up till then.
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This has so much potential to be hillarious.
But as the others say, you're trying to move the story along too fast.
Too fast based , too short , nice concept .
I give it three and a half pinkies out of five
Keep up the good work
I feel real sad for Rarity.
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I was afraid that would happen - everything I've written before has been a short story :-\
I'll have to workon that.
EDIT: I'm curious - do you guys think I should just add slower chapters or fleshen out some of the current chapters(maybe try past tense instead of present tense).
Came here because I misread the title. I wondered what a fashistona could be.
But now I'm interested in the actual story... Watching it!
"I just dropped off Spike - he's off with Princess Celestia on a quest to find his origins or something," Twilight said, rolling her eyes.
Well Twilight nice job being an a$$ about your bf no. Not everyoe has a stamp on their ass saying who they are.
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It's like his 5th quest this or something. Who cares? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
It's Ponyville, everyone's adventured to the fifth realm of pain or something.
You konw...I found it really bucked up how they don't freak out when the most bad ass stallion in Canterlot is on fire but they do when Rarity spills a drop of red wine on a whiter carpet...poor Fancy. And got to agree with Spikethed, Twilight was being a bitch.....go Spilight!!!
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Stallions can be replaced.
Fancy carpets can't.
Hmmm.....like it a lot, hoping to read more and ha, poor Twilight...the CMC and Pinkie Pie working together? RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!! Will be watching if you need any help, ideas or advice, I got your back, peace.
Let the hilarity ENSUE!!!
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edited for pacing and shenanigans
Oh man, those footnotes killed me. Especially the genius bonus about bacillus anthracis.
It's odd and the pacing is a bit confusing, but I like it!
A couple of typos: Twilight's muttering has a copy/paste problem, and there are two footnotes 3 and no footnote 4.
Any updates soon?