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Astrarian


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It might be the fanciest bed she's ever needed to sleep on, but the thing is, Rainbow Dash can't get to sleep.

Spitfire has some thoughts on why that is, since she can't sleep either. And so, Rainbow Dash takes the plunge into some decisions about where to rest her head.


I'd written this anyway but it is also an entry to to the Right Back At It Again! contest, because sometimes the important moments in a relationship are the conversations you have with each other. It won 4th place.
Reviewed on Louder Yay.

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Comments ( 19 )

Very impressed and liked it. The dynamic between Dash and Spitfire and Dash and Pinkie were really well done. It made me want to see more though the story does not necessitate it. Probably would be fun to see a double date between the two couples.

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Awhh I'm pleased that you liked it and took the time to leave me a lovely comment! Old-school shipping with this one!

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I have to admit PinkieDash is my favorite ship so this was an unexpected delight.

This was really well written and felt exactly like what a date between Pinkie and Dash would be. (except they didn't "date/go out")

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Thank you for leaving me such a nice comment, I'm stoked the fic worked for you!

Circle me and the needle moves gracefully,
Back and forth,
If my heart was a house, you'd be home

Wow does that bring back memories... that was a favorite song of mine a long, long time ago

Oh look at you: getting me to read Rainbow Dash!! :rainbowderp:

Romance wrapped up in the challenges of real life - my favourite kind of romance! Suffice to say, this was great. The idea and exploration of 'home' is something I really enjoy, and it's great to see how other people approach the subject. Your character interplay was super entertaining too, but that's par for the course with you, eh?

Also, it might have been the various ships but this just felt gloriously old-school. Which is a good thing, in case it needed saying. It's kinda inspired me to try something similar... So yeah, [+1 Inspiration, +1 Awe].

Thanks for taking the time to write and share your work!

Not gonna lie, I'm hella happy there are still PinkieDash stans alive after the series ended and that there is an actual new PinkieDash fanfic from this year and not 2012. Btw this was a really cute and fluffy fanfic!

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An oldie but a goodie, in my opinion! Thanks for the comment. I listen to a lot of Owl City when it comes to PinkieDash inspiration.

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Thank you my dude! I love forcing you to read Dash :p It feels old-school to me too... That really probably means I should enter it in this old-school contest thingie that's open this month huh. Thank you for the comment, it's really nice!

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Oh my, I didn't realise PinkieDash was starving, I'm happy to have put a fluffy fic on the table! Thank you for leaving me a nice comment :D

Bonny work, Astrarian. Some fluffy PinkieDash always goes down a treat, and they've got a lovely dynamic as you write them.

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Thank you for the kind words :)

Great story:twilightsmile:, can defiantly see that you put effort in. And good shipping choices too

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Thank you pal! And may I just say that's a fun userpic :D

I really enjoyed it:twilightsmile:! Heh, it’s a starship, thanks:twilightsheepish:

Nice story! And I enjoyed what little soarinfire there is in the story.

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Pleased you found things to enjoy, and thanks for taking the time to leave me a comment!

I like it, it is very interesting

This whole story was so sweet and lighthearted. It's really nice to have some fluff in these trying times.

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Thank you for the comment! Happy to provide fluff as a means of escape :3

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