At this rate Vinyl will be dead from sexual exhaustion within the week. Does Fancy really want her at his get-together, or just a disposable fuck-toy?

Sounds like she was suffering from withdrawl symptoms at the start, with the muted senses and shaking. Those must be some addictive drugs Octavia has.

At first, i was kind of disappointed when I realized you were putting Faithful on hiatus, but woah, I think I like this one even more.
And it's always nice to see B.E. Ellis allusions!

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I actually watched American Psycho during points of this chapter, and have read the novel in the past. Initially I was going to be harsher on Vinyl in this scene, but I changed my mind, as I have plans for the next chapter and didn't want her too damaged.

Very impressive catch.

This is starting to get kinda.....hardcore is the only thing that come to mind.

I'm startin to get scared for vinyl, that girl needs to rest up like pronto.

I love this story! It's just makes you feel a bit uncomfortable while reading it, but I thinks that's more an artistic skill rather than a negative. Please continue!

There is a lot oh clopping honing on but this is one oh the best stories I've ever red (I know bad grammar ) it includes the darker sides of any world that exicted and plaza hurry up I want to know what happens next

I feel heartache reading this, poor Vinyl. I cry when I read what happens to her.

Well... I don't even want to know what I just read. But.... No LSD

Octavia is...PURE EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ah, i remember this night. a good one it was. one of the best if i do say so myself.

This story sure is shattering my previous thoughts towards Octavia. She is...fucked up. For lack of better words, she is FUCKED UP!

This is the first clopfic I've read that didn't turn me on - I'm far too captivated by the drama of Vinyl's "descent" to be concentrating on sating myself.

I hate Octy for this.