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SamuelK28


I write for my own enjoyment. If other's like what I write, that's a bonus.

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This story is a sequel to Dinner with the In Laws


3rd in the Alternate Future series.

Twilight has had a rough day, then Apple Bloom turns up in her room. HOW MUCH!

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"Twi, you have five seconds to teleport to the deepest, darkest corner of Equestria whilst I go fetch my shotgun."

One word, Twi:

Run.

Okay...wow. I kind of now want to see AJ and Dashie's foal, too.

Well, I was ready to give the other two stories a bye as this one seemed to show that the entire cast hadn't turned into complete plotholes, until the last bit. So very done with this series. It was stupid of me to have read the second and third one at all. I'm sure there are people who find this kind of cringe and violence funny, but I'm not one of them.

Not downvoted or anything because it's my personal opinion, and nothing more.

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I apologise to have wasted your time. Your points are 100% valid. I'd clearly class these as crackfics and in no way should they be taken seriously. I'm not a writer and don't try to disguise it. I simply believe there are to many serious fics out there and not enough lighthearted comedies. We all need a laugh from time to time. Yes, there are probably to many sexual innuendos and I tried to steer this one in a different direction, only to end up back there. My overall aim though is simply to give just one person a laugh, nothing more and as long as that continues I'll continue this crazy series, but it will always focus on comedy and complete absurdities. Yes it is completely and utterly cringeworthy, that is the whole backbone to this series. I do understand where you are coming from though and I think the next one will be more Moonlight family friendly laughs focused on her potion studies.

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