Roses And Gems

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The First DemonFox

The First DemonFox #1 · May 27th, 2020 · 3 · · Arrival ·

Rushed time skip. Reaction on becoming a gem or knowledge on being a gem should be brought into question. Along with a whole heap of stuff that I missed or did not point out but these are the only problems I have with this story.

Supersaiyanblue

Supersaiyanblue #2 · May 27th, 2020 · 4 · · Arrival ·

Yea I love the concept and all that but slow down the pacing a little.

Broddrick

Broddrick #3 · May 27th, 2020 · 2 · 1 · Arrival ·

Alright. You have my curiosity since most SU fan fics are usually cringy and so far this has promise.

Silver Butcher

Silver Butcher #4 · May 27th, 2020 · 1 · · Arrival ·

Yay Lion, also this story kind of lost me.

But I'll keep my eye on it, and you.

Master king

Master king #5 · May 27th, 2020 · 2 · · Arrival ·

This is definitely a interesting beginning can't wait to see where this goes.

arandomboi12

arandomboi12 #6 · May 27th, 2020 · 1 · · Arrival ·

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Well that's not concerning at all.

GIGA-XISBASS

GIGA-XISBASS #7 · May 29th, 2020 · 3 · · Arrival ·

Well this should be fun. Definitely add onto this chapter so things flow more. Makes more sense if we have more of a reaction from Marcus about discovering about the gem and where he's at. And more reaction from the ponies upon first contact. Definitely take into account what The First Demonfox said.

Other than that, good start.

Master king

Master king #8 · May 31st, 2020 · 3 · · A Gem Mutant ·

This was a mostly cute beginning I hope Flurry and Marcus fall for each other, I officially ship them now.

Overlord_Bloodscorn

Overlord_Bloodscorn #9 · May 31st, 2020 · 1 · · A Gem Mutant ·

The Flurry Quartz (or whatever) is setting sails.
And also nice work arandomboi and if you are going to give Marcus the Steven background I would like to see it if you can or if plan to anyway give it the twilighting effect.

Deltorix