This is an interesting alternate take.

Loved it

Interessting alternative but i like the original better.
Also saving a live is quite honorable but in your current version he will be a father of Chrysalis next brood. I prefer that brood over a singel pegasus.
Not to mention what he already did to save the empire.

Nice chapter. I really want to see how this goes.

love it

A pity we only get a bit of this. Papa Greema would be an interesting concept to read but warrior king Greema is also good, plus he's got bug queen.

What's the fuck is going on here?

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magic

Ok, I'm assuming the baby is Cadence, but, where does this take place in the story?

Glad to see this continue!

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Not Cadance actually, but it is another known character, remember I mentioned the babie's auburn eyes.

speak of the demon goat and he shall appear.

HA!!!!!

It's good to see you again i feared this story was dead. I love this story. That only increased when you decided to do a chapter about a "new parent Greema" idea. I hope you do more "papa Greema" chapters even you need to time skip some parts. I would love to see more "papa Greema" story bits

Heh, squaring away provisions is one of the first steps to take when embarking on a trip.

Esto se pone interesante😀
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pink fur, aunburn eyes

pegasus baby

Is this cozy glow? Literally only character I can think of that matches the critera

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I think it is, the eyes and fur color match. Though the age might be off. Then again this Greema hasn’t met any ponies so he probably can’t judge age very well. That or equestrian ponies grow like real life ponies.

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It is Cozy Glow, i'm just taking some artistic liberties with the age.

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Oh neat. Being from Kludgetown would explain a lot about her canonically.
I have complete faith in Greema’s parenting abilities. The bar to be a good role model to Cozy Glow, is set so low you could step over it. Even if he somehow trips and falls he’ll still succeed.

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We require more cozy glow origins in being raised by a monster..... goat thing.

Wait... when did Greema get wings? And since when was he blue?! Is this Nightmare Greema?

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This is a what if.

continue com essa historia por favor ta muito legal eu amei essa historia por favor :)

I hope your still working on this as it's one of the best stories I've found on this site so far. The flow of the story is good, the main character is interesting, and I find it utterly hilarious that he accidentally knocked up Chrysalis.

Update?

Interesting, but now waiting for the update

If you would like to borrow an OC for this story, just let me know.

Hope we see the young Buck continue his adventure

For everyone that do not own a text to speech function here is a link.
https://ttsreader.com/de/
Just copy - paste the text and set the speed and language.
You'r welcome ♡
Stay snuggly and cuddle you'r fellow Brony

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When will the original timeline continue?

I hope we get at least one chapter and some characters development in this year...

O well, maybe 2023 will be better 👍