A time traveling pony on a mission to stop the future from ever happening again. We find our hero being spat out from a rift to Everfree Forest wounded.
Luckily he was found by Apple Bloom and is now living in Ponyville. Protecting everyone from the future.
After i let someone else proofread my work I have found out that proofreading it yourself is hard, for my proofreader has found more faults than i have.
And after 5 proof reads i still find some...sorry for that. And will continue proofreading.
Just edited with proper proof read now
Edited.
The new thumbnail looks awesome!
XD you already saw that first hoof... oh wait
Yup you did XD
Id also appreciate the one who gave it a thumbs down the reason so i can improve.