My Little Isekai Adventure
written by The saiyan brony
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The story is looking good
Fight on champ
Just wait until he upgrades that spell from a ball into swords.
Just a tip, having so many pictures of unimportant things is just distracting and cuts the flow of the story. We don't need to know what his breakfast, the dungeon entrance, or an ordinary door look like.
Plus, the ones that are important are best saved for the end, in the Author's Notes. Also, don't just rely on the pics for the description. You still want to describe the thing. That way if the picture gets deleted or moved you still have the description.
That was a heart pumping beyond epic chapter my heart was beating on the edge through all the dungeon.
This is a great story so far, and I can't what to read more of it?
so far this is a great story so far i cant can't what to read more of it
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I'll keep that in mind. Aside from that what did you think of the battle scenes?
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They were enjoyable. Battle scenes can be very hard to do. Check out these videos. They might help you master fight scenes.
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Thanks man. Sword and Shield. Very nice looking
Now this is an awesome story
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Agreed
This story is awesome! Is any of the Mane 6 gonna show up? Also, love the references hehehehehehe. Tiffany best blacksmith boi. XD
I’m sorry, but I feel like it should be at least somewhat obvious that you wouldn’t put chain mail directly on the body. At least have some fabric layer under it to prevent stuff like chaffing from having loads of interlocking metal links rubbing against and possibly pinching your skin. Even better if it is a relatively tough fabric to also help dampen hits.
I wish I can enter in this world of course I would probably ask some type of god or goddess to turn me into my Maria Stryker character who is a female kobold bard who likes giving out hugs and getting head Pats and return.
Also it's quite nice to have a friendly kobold on your team because they are cute and they should be protected.