AND I READ THE TITLE AND LOOKED AT THE PIC
*deep inhale with gasping noises*

>turns 13
>sex
I'm scared to read.

I don't often read stories like this for fear of wasting my time, but this was pretty good so far

I like *TRACKING ACTIVATED*

I just raped the like button, I have to say this story is good so far

>Scootaloo's spending time with her family.

1145413 Welcome to the world of fimfiction. Anything can happen here!

1145413
same.
please author. stop using the term "filly bits". PLEASE.

1145652
I've been here long enough to know so, but I like to point out to authors what they actually wrote - some just don't realize it right away.
I've done that countless times.

>Implying that being 13 is a perfectly fine age to call for sex
>Mfw:
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And you spelled revealed wrong in the description. I don't like clop in general, but it never looks good when the description has typos in it

1145659
Sorry, is too much; I saw it used before.

d'awwww

Just to clarify to people getting freaked out by sweetie's age 1 horse year is 2 human years

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Damnit....

1145616 HAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA!

Purty good so far! Make another chapter

1150382
Your wish is my command!

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NOTHING HAPPENED!!

1152115
Oh, that's a good comment.
But don't worry, something will happen...
sometime soon!

not very good. Dialogue and description is mechanical and unrealistic, and you use far too much tell and not enough show.

Do note that the 2nd chapter will be much longer than the first.
It has a lot of information...if you know what I mean.

Cute beginning, can't wait to see where it goes, so far I give it 4 mustaches out of 5

Sweetie belle is my favorite CMC. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it, but it seems a bit rough. I have no problem with pre-reading clop, so if you need a pre-reader, just gimme a shout. :)

1145769 I think having sex is ok for when you can physically get aroused in a way that your body can handle it. For both parties that is. But 13 IMO is still stretching it just a little bit, in the literal sense as well.

Sweetie Belle is best cotton blanket

1145769

>Implying that being 13 is a perfectly fine age to call for sex

Actually, it totally is, at least according to Japan anyway. Over there, the age of consent is considered to be 13. Maybe Equestria treats the subject the same way. Also, if you really think this idea is gross or "wrong" somehow, I should point out that that's your social programming talking. According to American society, no one is legally an adult until they turn 18 and the age of consent is considered to be at least 16. However, by thinking that way, you fail to take two things into account. 1- Sweetie Belle and Feather Weight are around the same age and though I can't say how it is for ponies, I can tell you from personal experience that around age 13 is when kids start thinking about sex (at least, that's when it started for me). While I don't think it's smart to get it on that young, I can't blame them for trying anyway. 2- In regards to any MLP fanfic, you have to remember that Equestria has a completely different culture than America. As such, anything the characters do needs to be viewed through the lens of their culture rather than our own.

Honestly, it doesn't even seem like much of a stretch to say ponies consider the age of adulthood to be 13. After all, although it has nothing to do with MLP, in the book "The Giver", the main character Jonas was declared an adult at only 12.