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Reads pretty good!
The only weird thing I caught was:
I would have typed The couch instead. Sounds more natural.
Hot dam do I love some I have no idea what sunset and Trixie are called God's I hope for a sequel if not still nice think this is going to my bucket list shelf
Excellent story so far I give it a 99 out of 200
This was both sweet and hot, thank you so much for continuing it (I'm sorry I didn't see it until now!)
Extremely hot story! Loved evert minute, though occasionally it was difficult to figure out what position they were in. Great sense of escalation though.
My only disappointments are:
-Even though Sunset apparently has the biggest breasts out of anyone in this story, we don’t get a good scene of anybody enjoying them.
-Sunset never got to taste Twi’s dick. Also missed a lot of great opportunities for a double blowjob. Two girls fucking each other while both sucking the third girl’s dick would have been amazing.
-I really want to know what their relationship with Twi is going to be after this. FWB? Regular client? Full-on third member of the relationship? Never see her again? — Inquiring minds want to know!