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Medical Officer Ratchet gets an opportunity to have his peaceful time with the Mane 7 and Spike. However, Chrysalis returns with revenge as she creates a band of evil robotic clones to destroy both Ratchet and his pony friends. Ratchet must lead his friends to victory as they confront their returning foe.
Note: This takes place after Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen and during the events of MLP: FIM season 8 episode 13: The Mean Six.
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So, the later chapters will explain how Ratchet came to know the Mane Six and Spike in the first place, right?
Also, am I correct to assume that The Mean Six is another episode you wish to fix?
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Yes, I want to somewhat fix that episode.
Also, yes, I will do that. Be patient. What do you think of this so far?
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It's a pretty good start and I'm very much looking forward to seeing what comes next.
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Glad you’re interested, buddy. You won’t be disappointed.
After reading this, I did like that Spike actually got to go with the girls on the trip.
Unlike in the actual episode where he got left out for some reason.
Interesting how Chrysalis thought the clone part through with having a way to ensure they obey her.
A couple of things for thoughts and such.
Wished that they brought up about Nightmare Moon too when they were talking about the stuff about anger and jealousy too.
I also wished Spike was the one that freed the girls rather than Starlight doing it(probably just the bitterness I had on what happened to Spike in the season 6 finale and how it was up to Starlight to save them). I mean, if what allowed them to break out of those bonds was by lighting it on fire, why didn't Spike at least try to use his fire beforehand? Pretty sure the anti-magic properties can't stop his fire, especially if he switched to regular fire(think we saw him do that on that frozen cloud in Equestria Games)
This story rather feels like a sequel... Is there more planned?
Everyone in the first chapter comment section is smiling
Ponies to use the elements and Cybertron Warrior any other time. Sound like a solid plan.
Why not create a Starlight Glimmer clone? What better way to instill respect than destroying her the first sign of rebellion of the group.
That way they know she means business and could destroy Starlight Glimmer at least once, even if only as a clone.
This sound more and more like a sequel...
Maybe make a story pre Nightmare Moon out of it? I certainly would read it.
Feels more and more like a sequel than the first story of a potencial line of stories.
These are contradictory.
Maybe add its critical but they have still time to fix it before it becomes life threatening.
Starscream make no sence, while Rachet has been rational and had very good points.
greatest
I know it's actually a big difference from a race perspective, but would there be a big difference between a medic and a mechanic when one is a mechanical being in general?
nothing was out of the ordinary.
I can understand and belive they can mimicking melee weapon being part of the body like a saw or a blade connected to a arm, nothing else like a claw or finger nail on a animal or human.
But range weapon? Nope, can't see that happen.
To different in foundational basic build of the body.
Worst chapter of them all, mainly because it was unrealistic in any way that they could mimicking technological weapons unless they only looked like it while being something else entirely.
Pretty sure the area of effect damage would be absolutely lethal in damage to organics...
Maybe make him 'greatly disorientated'?
There is a funny parody comic where Starlight Glimmer tries to become princess for reforming Chrysalis.
Unfortunately I can't find it
"It’s hard to find the good in some people & it's harder when there isn't any."
Mark Twain
(AFAIK referring to Kaiser Wilhelm 1)
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It probably get a lot more popular if it had a prequel and a sequel
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My Lord, you had a fun time with this story. Holy Shit…
First off, this is just a simple crossover story, so there are no “prequels” or “sequels” planned. But I appreciate your comments…even if they were too spammy.
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Basically 1 comment per chapter the end one not counting would not be spam like.
I can recommend some comment sections where you actually might accuse me of it