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The CMC are supposed to meet up at the clubhouse, but when Scoots is late, Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom go to find out what's wrong.
Preread by: QueenChrysalsisForever: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/246282/QueenChrysalisForever
Cosmic Eclipse: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/218083/Cosmic+Eclipse
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Nice experiential read, though I felt that more emotions could be poured in. It serves a valuable reminder that we should be grateful for our mothers and our circumstance. You may not be able to choose your starting point in life, but you can certainly choose the path you seek to follow.
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Hmm thank you for the feedback. I tried to convey how I felt, while still being enjoyable for all readers.
You should link to QueenChrysalsisForever and Cosmic Eclipse's profiles in the synopsis. By the way, do you know how either of them felt about the treatment of the villains of the show?
That was very sweet. Kudos to you for the topic and your sensitive story
I can relate in a different way.
The dad I grew up with was not my father, but because he was there, I see him as a father.
As much as he moans about how much he wasn't there, I say that I don't care.
As for my Bio dad, I've only met him once.
I have both parents, but my relationship with my mom is well distant to say the least. but it makes you value having them both, just the same. good story Nailah
Nice story!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. <3