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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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After being warned to stay away from Starlight Glimmer, Spike and Eric Reed run to her room as fast as they can, where she had locked herself away in. They believe that Starlight is angry at them for something, but they have no idea what it is.

What could Starlight be upset about, and what will her friends have to do to earn forgiveness?

In fact, did they even do anything wrong?



This story takes place after the events of the story A Giant Adventure to Equestria, which explains why and how the human OC Eric Reed is in Equestria, and how his bonds with the other characters formed.

However, it won't be necessary to read that story to understand this story, and laugh. All you truly need to know is who Rarity, Spike, and the reformed Starlight Glimmer are.

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Comments ( 22 )

Oh my God. :rainbowlaugh: The mountains in this fic aren't just funny, they're hill areas!

First comment! :pinkiehappy:

First view! :pinkiehappy:

First like! :pinkiehappy:

First fav! :pinkiehappy:

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I can't tell if I hate you or love you for that pun.

“Darlings, on the count of three, run.”

“You wait till three, I’m outta here.”
-Charlie Sheen

I feel like this could’ve been explored a bit more, but it’s funny nonetheless

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happy first-everything! I have to think of a prize maybe.


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My guess is it's the former.



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I could have, but I meant this to end on a mystery note about what happened next.

For reasons I was wracking my noggin to figure out, Starlight Glimmer had locked herself in her bedroom in Princess Twilight Sparkle’s crystal castle. About five minutes ago, Applejack tracked down Spike and me and told us that "Starie" had holed herself in her room two hours ago and wanted us to stay away from her for a week. Apparently, Spike and I were “supposed” to know the reason, but neither of us had a clue what it was! What the two of us did know was that we were running to the castle, now nearing its huge gold doors.

I'm literally only at this part and already have a guess: that time of the month

Just finished, and let me say: CALLED IT!!

"Um, make that two stallions and Trixie."

I would not want to be in the room under above or next to hers that night

Buck that noise! Take one for the team, and help a mare out!:trollestia:

You misspelled morning as moaning at one point.

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Do you mean

Starlight took a step forward and lowered one of her eyelids even more. Crud, she had already used up the willpower she had to resist when she tried to tell us to buzz off before moaning, so maybe we should just shut up.

If so, that's meant to be moaning, since Eric was talking about what Starlight tried to tell him and Spike when they reached her room before she moaned and stopped. I think I know why that didn't sound right, so I edited the line Starlight said before so it should sound better now.

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Oh I misunderstood that than.

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If Rarity's plan fails, they might have no choice but to:rainbowlaugh:

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Or in the case of equines in college and high school: Spring Break

“You’re NOT helping, Rarity!” I shouted. Saying that this wasn't one of Rarity's best moments of giving reassurance would be a colossal understatement. But what she said about alicorns did make me write a mental note to do N-O-T forget to keep away from Twilight Sparkle when it’s her turn to go into heat. That is, if that pony even does , and I actually wouldn’t rule out the chance that she might not do it. All I know for sure about this "part" of her life is that Twi hasn’t entered heat since we met.

Somehow I got the feeling that he's GOING to forget... though somehow I also get the feeling that when Sunset visits during her's, she is not going to tell him.

Anon: It's going to be a LONG week.

Twilight: :facehoof:

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With Sunset being his girlfriend, Eric would be much more willing to be around her while she's in heat.

At least until she starts wearing him out.:heart:

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And FIRST BLOOD for lethal use of a pun.

Rarity said, “Oh, my. This isn’t good. Out of all mares, next to alicorns, unicorn mares have the least control of themselves when in heat and we will take any nearby male that's not a colt, not just stallions. The stronger our natural magic, the more--”

That seems very specific but it’s sad I have to bring up the very real argument that at least she’s not going after colts. I’m not mad though given she basically has no control over herself.

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Fun fact: I wasn't able to fit this in the story, but when any of the mane 6 (in these stories' continuity) start to enter heat, they run off and stay gone until they exit heat, so they wouldn't get any ideas about hitting on their male friends. Twilight, up to this point, hasn't been in heat since Eric was in Equestria, so she hadn't yet needed to take off since Eric's been around.

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