• Published 8th May 2020
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Hard On, Come Off - The Mad Clopper



Prince Solaris (R63 Celestia) and the human Jane have been together for some time. Tonight, however, they decide to finally move onto the next stage of their relationship. Sex! I’m talking about sex.

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At last, the time came that she could no longer hold herself up vertically, and fell with a puff of sheets onto her back.

"What're we gonna do on the bed, Solaris?"

Did I ever tell you it's a pleasure to read through your stuff? Because it kinda is.

When you said "The Big L", I thought you were talking about love, not a certain Night Mare.

Now I kinda want to see a chapter with them trying to calm Luna down, also curious about why she is aginst them being an item.

Congratz, ya got featured. 5/8/2020

10223578
You're supposed to end with onii-chan.

ROBCakeran53
Moderator

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Hi dead, I'm Mad.

At the risk of being pedantic, shouldn't this have the Alternate Universe tag?

10224053

Because Solaris brought home a giant naked mole rat and didn't even have the good grace to ask if he could keep her.

10224563
Got it, thanks for the catch.

10224782 Indeed. Everyone knows humans are basically rats. Nodding sagely

I enjoyed this a lot!

It was funny, sexy and well-written in all the right places.
Good job!

Comment posted by Solarfollow deleted May 14th, 2020

This pleases me.

It's so lovely! Full of care, cuteness and fun! And love, so much love!
I'd be delighted if this story would acquire a sequel soon!

> None of her previous steadies had done such a thing for her, even the quickies

I understand this is a thing that happens, but I don't get it. How can you not? It's super rude to not offer and follow through if requested. If I were a lady, this would be near-instant disqualification. Well, with hands at least. I can get a guy not wanting to apply mouth after coming inside.

Has she had bad luck, or is this a lot more common than I think?

Anyway, how can this possibly be done? We need an epilogue with Luna. Otherwise some setup from chapter 1 never pays off. Maybe she goes barebackeverything riding?

I'll admit, before reading this, I had some worry towards the "realism" aspect mentioned in the description. I had been burned by stories that had claimed such a thing and become an extreme drag and boring piece to pay attention to.

You on the other hand actually executed it quite well, and for that, I'm thankful for this story and enjoyed reading through it.

10232564
That's actually a good point. Thanks, I'll go about checking on that, as well as a few other parts.
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Thanks! I'm glad, cause I've had many issues that matched your own with "correct" stories. I wanted to try something that was more realistic, while also... well, this!

Dan

Get Asgore Dreemurr on the line and invite him to join in. Emphasis on the "murr."

Fuzzy, bearded rulers deserve all the cuddles.

They didnt invide the Nightly Stud... How ruuude :duck:

Great chapter :twilightsmile: I would
love to have stuff like that worked into a long adventure. For instance 'Off the Mark' etc.

Where's the sequel where it turns out Solaris could get her pregnant and now they're dealing with that and her being pissed.

Great story. We need more woman on stallions clop.

any plan's on doing a sequel?

ROBCakeran53
Moderator

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Actually, since it's been long enough, here's this!

It's a dealership in Flint. My mother actually bought a couple vehicles from them back in the 00's.

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