• Member Since 4th Nov, 2016
  • offline last seen January 22nd

PenHeart3


Do not stand at my grave and weep, I am not there. I do not sleep.

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Is this the real life?
Is this just fantasy?
Caught in a landslide,
no escape from reality
Open your eyes,
look up to the skies and see
Bohemian Rhapsody, Queen


As time goes on, Fine Detail is forced to live with her sins. When the past is too much to bare, she needs help. She was heading to the only pony she can go to, before passing out in the snow. Awoken at a warrior's house, she had been given what few ponies wish they had, a second chance. She has to be able to stand up on her own hooves again. If she can do so, how will she take her new life? And can she fight the past that still haunts her?


This is a sequel to Eclipse Bomb (probably one of Rathbane's most underappreciated stories yet) and I recommend reading that first before reading this.
Credits:

  • Opium4TmassS for being there from the beginning, and proof reading this story :raritywink:.
  • Rathbane for creating Spiral Swirl and her family, and for giving me a reason to keep writing :twilightsmile:.
Chapters (1)
Comments ( 1 )

I’m glad to hear you are doing good as well friend.

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