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It's hard to be alive

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Anonymous try to alive in Twilight's epic adventure

Well, Anonymous is ordinary sarcastic person

but his normal thoughts are not working in equestria and his pony friends

that is your life Anon, just give up.

ps. start from mlp fim issue #1 when chrysalis kidnapped cmc

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Chadbane

Chadbane #1 · May 5th, 2020 · 5 · · This palce is wield ·

It was difficult to understand what was going on, but it wasn't the worst attempt I've seen at a story. I'm sure you'll get better as your English improves!

FIM Fiction

FIM Fiction #2 · Aug 4th, 2020 · 1 · · This palce is wield ·

Bravo sir.
I approve.

FIM Fiction

FIM Fiction #3 · Aug 5th, 2020 · 1 · · 2.you are wield ·

Not grammerly correct, but easy to follow. Well done!

Watcher32

Watcher32 #4 · May 9th, 2021 · · · 2.you are wield ·

Throwing the Unknown Person straight into battle, without any background, leaving the reader in complete non-acquaintance of the nature of this Person, the features of the world, and so on.. After the battle, the explanations should(must) be broad and clear...
Gооgletrans overcomes grammatical errors relatively easily, creating much more new ones, so this is not a problem for non-English speakers.