Everypony in Ponyville is having a blast, what with Christmas coming up. But one pony, Scootaloo, isn't having a great time. Rainbow Dash is in the hospital, after she and Scootaloo encountered some rough ponies. She had some scratches, but Dash had some major injuries. Scootaloo worries that Dash won't make it. The Mane Six and some others notice her droopiness, so they team up to make a super fun party for Scootaloo's happiness, also included with some singing! This musical is a joy to read, unless you don't like your favorite pony being injured and in the hospital!
(Note: Feel free to sing my parodies of songs and post somewhere!
Just let me know, and credit me/the original person who made them! <3, Akemi-chan)
Chapters (6)
This story is beast
though the lyrics felt awkward, my only criticism
>>tubaguy
I'm sorry that the lyrics are awkward....it could be better if you sang it, maybe? Idek. I must've been hyper while typing the lyrics.
Or my songwriting skills on christmas related songs are...meh.
I'll give this story a track for now
>>DarkWing
I THANK YOU EVER SO WARMLY.
*shakes hand vigorously*
Happy new EWW! Priceless!
Y'know, the phrase "a design like vvvvvvvvvvv" and that little LOL really detract from the description of the dresses, imho. They just take me out of the story, and seem oddly childish. Without that it would sound so much more magical. Something more like "a pattern of v's" would convey the same thing just as clearly and be pronounceable as a bonus...
Other than that one thing, loved this chapter, so full of d'aws...
528433
Sorry...I'll fix that little error. At the time, I didn't know how to explain it.
I liked your story but I almost cried when scootaloo feinted because I thought that she might die. Well I am glad that she got better.
740033
...No one's ever cried at one of my stories...
That means so much to me. Thanks.
Don't mention it.
You should write more stories
752817
Ohohohoho-
Why do you laugh when I am serious. At least that kinda looked like a laugh to me.
756722
Ohohohoho isn't a laugh.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA is a laugh.
See the difference?
What does ohohohoh mean then?
759405
Ohohohohoh is...a thing.
This is a very interesting story, although I'm reading this in July eheh
oh dear!