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Two black stallions, old and living their last days, sit in the rain outside a café and discuss the lives of the main six. As they come to each point they muse on what is happening in their lives and how to others their lives may seem incredible, but in reality can be quite troublesome.

Stormy Ponyville. They come first to discuss Pinkie Pie, and how boring and trying working energetic hours in Sugarcube Corner must be.
One raises Fluttershy, a pony they met on the way into Ponyville, as another example - how ideal her life must seem to animal lovers.

The old stallions walk back into the café to shelter from the rain, and take a seat at a table with Rarity. Striking up idle conversation, one male pony highlights Rarity's sales. It is made apparent she had been stood up by whoever she was waiting for.
The black ponies talk amongst themselves about the Sweet Apple Acres industry and how hard it must be for local businesses to stay on their feet.

Sweet Apple Acres. Applejack is sitting down with Big Mac and discussing some issues they are having. Both siblings agree tough times are ahead.

The trio in the café discuss the injustices the world deals to small ponies. Eventually the stallions take their leave. Some friends arrive as they leave to greet them.

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This sounds interesting, although it looks like you put a plot synopsis as the description. Normally you write a story hook of one paragraph rather than summarising the entire story.

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