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I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.
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Why does Twilight being a nerd require a warning?
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Exposure to Twilight being a nerd has been proven to lead to such symptoms as enjoying books and desiring to explore new and creative lands of wonder within the sufferer's imagination. Observe poor Rainbow Dash upon realizing she had caught egghead from unprotected exposure to Twilight Sparkle.
Remember to wear your PPE, guys.
This is the only thing I can say in response to this:
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Well, that was exceedingly meta!
This was hilarious, and yet amusingly thought provoking as well. Great job!
The sex was okay, (I’ve spent the last couple days trying to read all the entries I didn’t read as they came out, so I’m getting a little burnt out on porn.) but the rest of it was more than funny enough to earn an upvote.
Incredible. A joy to read.
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
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Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-I did actually giggle-snort at all this meta.
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I know I'm not really all that good at it yet, but I figure if I just submit as many stories as possible then I'm bound to win something.-- so damn meta.-
lot's-- too much apostrophe.-
"Twi, ponies are just reading these things to rub off a quick one and go to sleep. No one cares about romance or all that touchy-feely crap, they just want to read porn," Rainbow said.-- unnecessary tag, since we can already guess who's saying it.-Sex scene ended abruptly and quickly.
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After all, both mares had been cooped up writing erotic stories about their favorite adventurer, they needed some sex to clear their heads and get back to writing.-- are we still in the meta stuff, I wonder?------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 44/100
Allure: 65/100
Enticement: 20/100
Immersion: 10/100
Prose Quality: 85/100
Total Score: 224/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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Giggly feedback is the best kind!
Faved for the it's-kinda-meta-but-at-the-same-maybe-not line this walks in a most excellent way.