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Banana Pie
Yes heelo it Banan Pie you want good Banan orz naughty big long Banan?
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No thank you. Good to see a new writer though. I hope you keep improving.
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Tank u frind.
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yez nex chapt cum suun...
soonnnnnnnnn as I has tim to wrk on it.
It's a good story but it to fast past .
For example .he's my work of your first para graph .its a good story but slow down ,ok.
.button walked through the everfree forest, his mind was clouded with statements from his mother. statements that didn't sit to well with the colt .as he traced through the ever forest he flicked a rock that sat in the centre of the grey path with his hooves .an angry snout formed on his lips .Just because I play games doesn't mean I'm obsessed with them ,he yelled.his voice echoed ,bouncing off the ancient hard oak wood trees of the forest .the outburst broke his rage induced walk and he soon realised that he was somewhere in a place he wasn't meant to be .I'm not in white woods he said . A nervous sweat broke through button and cold tingerly feeling grew in his back .
I'm in Everest. He said, dread oozing from his voice. As he stared into the darkness of the woods that surround him ,suddenly a growled appeared behind the colt
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HOLY
FUCKING
SHIT.
You're a genius!
Unfortunately, I am stupid, and can't write with such skill...
BUT I WILL TRY!
i have to say my friend .your pretty good with Zecora's speech and you do have skills
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Thanz uo !D
10234834
For some odd reason, I can never make ANYTHING rhyme unless I'm making the rhyme for Zecora.
I'm surprised this story isn't only one chapter long. Why didn't you do that?
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One chapter long???
But.
It story of ramance, cutness, an sexxxxxxxxxxxx
why make only one chapter long???
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To what are you confused about?
If it is my amateur writing, I apologize.
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What about the end confused you???
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Was it Pinkie and the ax and reference to future chapter for the plot line???
*Innocent blinking and banana*
Oh, great... The beginning of this chapter made me want to read a clop where Sweetie Belle acts like a dog for Button.
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Yeah.... That ain't gonna happen in this story, no matter how cute and sexy the idea sounds.
Sorry.
HOWEVER *redacted information on another story I'm working on*
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Oh goodie!
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If the "wha" is for Pinkie,
don't worry things will be understood. (Maybe. This is Pinkie we're talking about so don't count on it.)
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It has something to do with Pinkie.
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Same but got lucky thanks to my job. Work outside and just let my imagination go wild. Author probably did the same. Taking the pup on a date is when stories get a lil serious and might end up finishing up the story sooner. Might need to dance around some issues. Talking to the pup about dating in society, trying to hide from ponies without raising suspension and top it off no sex but actually meaningful kiss. Why the hell did I put all that. You know your stuff sorry
Except for this. lol