“Okay. I promise, Pinkie Promise!” said Pinkie. “Cross my heart and hope to fly, yadda yadda, in my eye, now please keep going.”
Rereading this again because it's such an enjoyable read and as I'm reading this part of the chapter I felt that the last bit would have worked a little better like, "now please. Keep. Going!!!" As it felt like a desperate need to be fucked moment.
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Nice Gravity Falls reference
Rereading this again because it's such an enjoyable read and as I'm reading this part of the chapter I felt that the last bit would have worked a little better like, "now please. Keep. Going!!!" As it felt like a desperate need to be fucked moment.
This was a interesting first part.