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Sentinel Shield


Wannabe Writer, making Self inserts and whatever else since the 2000's

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Sentinel Shield is a Royal Guard.
This title comes with prestige, with respect! Those who have it wear it proud!
However, Sentinel isn't an ideal guard. He is sloppy and can be a bit brash. Some wonder how he even got on the guard.
Celestia sees this and thinks he just needs a chance to prove himself, what better chance than escorting her prized pupil Twilight Sparkle in Ponyville to ease her nerves of Nightmare Moon returning.
However, little did she or anypony know. Not only would Sentinel have to keep Twilight safe when Nightmare Moon does return, but his life would change forever.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 20 )

Oh god yes

Keep it up and don’t get stressed!

I just read it, and its goooodddd!

Also I love rewritten episodes of mlp with a bit of mix like this one!

"Common Twilight! Just give the ponies of Ponyville a chance, maybe they have some interesting things to say!" Spike said, as a Pink pony trotted towards them. "Common, just try it!"

Ok, I don't want to be a grammar Nazi but I think you mean Come on not Common.

I’m intrigued to see more of this story, especially the new faces.

"Nightmare Moon? Isn't that an old bedtime story to keep little colts and fillies from misbehaving?" Sentinel questioned.

"Regardless, I'm sending her to Ponyville to oversee the preparations and I would like you to be her royal escort." Celestia said, barely acknowledging what he said.

Hey wait Celestia never answered his question.

Thank you for not making Sentinal an Element of Harmony at the very start, that trope is over used in my opinion. If he becomes one over the course of the story, that would be interesting, giving enough time to show how he earns it. I understand why people write them, but never liked 7th ponies being Elements at they very start. Watching them become one over the first season or 2 is so much more interesting.

However, Sentinel isn't an ideal guard. He is sloppy and can be a bit brash. Some wonder how he even got on the guard.

...Doesn't that go for every character not a part of the Mane Six?

Are you going to add a twist to this story, maybe some romance?

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How about not letting Sentinel be part of the hecklers. I mean its just a stage show

Wish i had found this sooner, i always love a good royal guard Story, as I have High respect for them. In fact, have a own royal guard oc.

And I admit, the Introduction of your oc got me thinking

Nicely done, love his devotion.

But i noticed you tend to write too instead of to

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Yeah, I'm working on it, thanks for the comment.
:pinkiehappy:

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Youre welcome.

The first comment, sorry, old habit

Poor sentinel, can't get a break, can he?

Another good chapter, loved the cameo of derpy

*Seeing that not having the certain purple dragon*.... Why am I smell that this is like "killing" Spike one?.

*See the cover* YOu gonna ship OC with Twilight, don't you? :rainbowderp:

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I would never harm Spike, he is a precious green bean

As for the cover, that actually wasn't my choice to have them looking at each-other like that, it was the artist, no hidden messages to be found here

One right here tho

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I use "kill" mean different way, not litterally (if you want to know the example, I can give you). But anyway, I see you make your OC is not 7th elements, good way.

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