• Member Since 17th Dec, 2011
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Faindragon


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Notharam finds himself awoken within an old sanctum. Why is he here and who are the rest of the ponies with him?

Chimes In the Dark is a story woven from my view of events in MLP:FiM. I won´t write anything about the story; after all, it´s you that shall be judging it, not I.

Chimes is finished, but some of the chapters haven't had their grammar corrected. If you want to help out on that, give me a heads up, I need all help I can get with that!

As a side note, the [Sad] tag is there on Request from one of my prereaders.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 14 )

dont forget the new episode there are ah few things (the control of the sun and the moon is something that celestia can do because she is an unicorn. in pre discort time unicorns raised them both)

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Yea, I saw that in todays episod aswell but I decided that I will not change it. The part with the alicorns being the one who raise the sun and the moon is important for the rest of the story.

Chimes was finished weeks ago, but its just now I have started with the grammar correction, leaving me with this kind of details to think about how to do. :scootangel:

Thanks for the heads up thou!

i have read the 2 first chapters now
story is good
lets show how its going on

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I could give you the entire story if you want it, with all the grammar misstakes within it. :twilightsmile:

:D yay for chimes, Im glad to see it on fimfiction

the grammar wasn't so bad
the story had in my mind a few errors with the canon but it was good on it self

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Let me know those errors, I tried to make it as clean as possible for erros so anything that I can change I will.

If you feel like it that is, always forgot to add that... My last comment sounded so... demanding :fluttershysad:

Notharam? Backwards Marathon!

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That I have never thought about :O But yea, now that you say it... :rainbowlaugh:

I hope you enjoy the story if you read it :scootangel:

Wool wopp lovely story Fain and now it is time for me to read After Discord :D

(SS is me) and Fain after reading "The day after" OMFG masterpiece or though the overall ending of Chimes could have had a better ending and in my opinion I think you killed off Mistrunner to fast for my liking. but the good thing is I like it and that is what counts :D

Is english your first language?

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No, english is my second language and a language I'm not very good at. I'm trying to learn and write better, and I have noticed how much writing have helped me with that.

How come? :twilightsmile:

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