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Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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Rainbow Dash has a crush on Aloe, and has decided that it's time to tell her. To her annoyance, it seems Lotus knows her secret. Also, Rainbow Dash has a thing about people touching her hands, for some reason.


The prologue is a fun little scene I thought up to go along with the story, and the official story is only 1k, so... I'm claiming this fits into my exactly 1k stories!


This little weirdness was inspired by the random background pairing of Aloe and Rainbow Dash in my story Seducing Success, if you're interested.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

10196861
Aha! Thank you! Google image search doesn't seem to like Deviantart anymore.

As always, you have a knack for cute. I like the unusual pairing.

Yay, more weird Dash lesbian pairings.

Dash your middle name is Danger, not subtlety.

Rainbow, you wouldn't know subtlety if it smacked you in the muzzle.

So, after reading this many stories, I'm getting the slight feeling most of these are going to be shipfics. I could be wrong though, might have to read a few more :rainbowlaugh:

10657578
Nope. Not wrong at all :D

Some of Dash's vocabulary is...off, but I won't screech about it.
this was cute.

though I can never remember which one is aloe and which one is lotus.

as stated by others, short and sweet.

11005417
Psh, my Dash is perfect, everyone says so. :D

"You really weren't mistaken." Rainbow Dash grinned. "Though I thought I'd been more subtle than that!"

okay..it's not her vocabulary that's off.
it's her grammar/word choice

she wouldn't say "i'd been"
she'd say "I was"

11005436
plus slander is the wrong word

when it's written, it's called Libel

11005440
Yeah but the expression is "lies and slander." :P

11005441
expressions can be altered to fit the context.

you could just as easily say "Lies and Libel."

and honestly....that sounds cooler, I think :pinkiehappy:

Awkward Rainbow Dash confessions are always a fun little treat.

Cute start, excited to see where this goes.

Super fun read, really enjoying the awkward Dashie confessions.

Aloe grinned wickedly at Rainbow Dash. "Happy endings."

Plus this made me laugh.

Dash can be shipped with everyone

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