Book 1 - The Behemoth came to Canterlot

by Equimorto

Ring a Prayer for the Falling

The sky was clear and the air was still, when the Behemoth came to Canterlot, and the sound of its steps over the mountain echoed in every street and through every window and door.

No pony dared speak, as the Behemoth walked through Canterlot, and the shadow it cast made the citizens shiver and the fountains freeze and flowers and plants close up as if it was nighttime.

And the souls of the living shrieked as they were ripped from their earthly shells and carried along with the storm, and the souls of the dead were raised alongside them and all they headed to shatter against the Behemoth.

Comments

[teneluxes_]

this is WAYYYYYY to short like?-

[Skyblazer9]

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I totally agree, it should have more detailing exactly WHO or WHAT the Behemoth is.

[The Loner]

I'm with you two, too short and not enough context. There should be a rule about how short a chapter can be to be posted! Unfortunately, this story earns a downvote from me, and a removal from my list.