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#2 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

Dis gon b gud.

>>1136225 You gonna get banned

EDIT: And it was

#3 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

(revision of the speedclop prompt. This is what I'd initially planned, and wanted to write, but time constraits and work resulted in the other thing :P)

#4 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

What an excellent thing to see at the top of the new stories list on login.

On a Side note, does anyone else adblock all image macros when they see them?

#5 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

Wait, since RD ate a Zap Apple raw why didn't she change?:rainbowderp:

#6 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

>>1136262

She was intend on eating it and AJ talked her out of it

#8 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

>>1136469

Well played sir, well played.

#9 · 239w, 6d ago · · · Zap Happens ·

Yep. Another favourite AppleDash.

I have to say stallion aj is hot the way you described him:rainbowwild:

Also, i have noticed there is a distressing lack of art of r63 AJ rutting normal Dash senseless against a tree.

This criminal lack must be fixed!

>>1136225 Rainbow Dash always firsts in style. :rainbowdetermined2:

#13 · 239w, 5d ago · 2 · · Zap Happens ·

You. You gender bent ponies and I liked it. What the hell, man? Upvotes, faves, and lots of praise for you.

>>1140877

True , but the thought of a drooling, barely coherent Dash seems so much more appealing :rainbowwild:

#16 · 239w, 5d ago · · 1 · Zap Happens ·

>>1140904 one word. Futashy.

>>1140912

But then it's not appledash !

>>1140928another word. three way

But then that's appledashfutashy ! It's appledash that is needed!

Oshi-, glad i read the comments on this. Futajack? I thought it was F/F, which doesn't really do it for me, but this... This will be good.:rainbowwild:

*Adds to read later*

Amazing, really amazing, I loved it

This is really well written. Nice and descriptive, details in all the right places. How ever, you focused mainly on RD and ignored Applejack during the sex scene. I feel like I didn't get all of the emotions. Maybe it was a writing choice, I dunno. Anyway, really good work and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Please write more! :D

P.S: I don't think "Normalcy" is a word

great! awesome and so on and so on... soooooo what about those preening lessons? gonna write tht one too?:applejackunsure:

>>1144499

It is indeed a word! And that's somewhat intentional. This is supposed to be from dash point of view without being first person. This does mean AJ falls to the wayside a bit.

>>1144741

Maybe. I'd only want to do so if i feel i can fill out an entire chapter though, and i don't think i can at the moment.

Nice :D :rainbowlaugh:

Mmmm, stallion AJ sounds sexy at the moment :rainbowwild:

The story itself was very well written and left me curious about those preening lessons :ajsmug: Either way, a great read and hope to hear more from you soon.

A fave, thumbs up, and mustache for you good sir! :moustache:

Pretty good.

Really well written. The pairing works well, story is nice and tidy, no real errors to mention, and a well described clop scene to boot!

I grant a seal of approval on this one! You did well :pinkiehappy:

>>1154094

Of course the pairing works, it's appledash! ;)

:ajsmug::heart::rainbowkiss:

>>1154454

I concur, but I really only said that to mention that it came across as being realistic and making sense due to how it was written. I'm not much of a "pairing" kind of guy :rainbowlaugh:

>>1154470

I figured ;) my first effort at this prompt ended up be g almost purely clop. This is what i aimed for initially, with more feeling/shipping.

>>1154507

I understand, I'm just saying that I admire the effort you put into writing it, at the very least. That's what's important to me :rainbowkiss:

I find it hilarious how most of the clopfics have better stories and writing than most of the "safe" fanfics, yet the clopfics get the flank of everything.  But I digress.

Great writing, great imagery, overall great.  Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Quite impressive. Not only is this well told and *ahem* entertaining, but everyone is as in-character is they could possibly be from start to finish. Not many stories in this genre can do that.

>>1160892

Thanks! I'm actually quite proud of this one, and would likely post it on my main account if my brony co-workers didn't know about it. Considering they do, finding clop would just be all kinds of awkward :x

>>1161238

Thank you! characterization is the thing I try to strive for the most when writing these stories. I'm glad to hear my efforts are paying off!:pinkiehappy:

>>1136267 More like snatched it from her.

Anyway, a well-written fic, and a great, big pleasure to read. :heart::pinkiesmile:  Hope to see more from you. :scootangel:

BEAUTIFUL. That was beautiful.

Seriously though. Have both of them eat a zap apple. Let the Yaoi happen, man, let it happen.

>>1174908

Nah! That's not my type of thing :derpytongue2:

However, if you want to add something else to your list of "must write"... :rainbowlaugh:

>>1174914

That list is far too long as it is...

Awww... I was hoping it'd be rainbow-striped, like a candy-cane!  :pinkiesad2:

Seriously, quite enjoying this... though I'm wondering just what eating three raw zap apples will do to Rainbow!

*snickers*

And, I'll admit, what would happen were somepony (:applecry:) to accidentally mess up a batch of Zap Apple Jam that made it into town....  

>>1291161

Well, one bite turned AJ into a stallion but that happened overnight. For dash, it happened a whole lot faster because she ate three... And who knows, it might last a little longer :rainbowkiss:

Woo Hoo! More Zap happinin! :pinkiehappy:

I love it:pinkiehappy:

Love these :pinkiehappy:

keep up the good work!

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