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Spitfire and Soarin are enjoying a flying session when she recounts upon how much she feels for him. Tomorrow is the day of the Best Young Flyer Competition, and with practice nearly every day, she can't seem to think of a good time. Will she ever tell Soarin how she feels?

Inspired by "Spitfire X Soarin' You Belong With Me" PMV by Jayspirit111

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Pretty good so far. Only thing is, you seem to be playing your cards a bit early. Just my opinion, though.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

1140248 It may seem like I am but don't you worry :3 plenty more to come. I just wanted the first chapter to be quite intense to reflect how strong Spitfires feelings are for Soarin. Thanks for reading :) :pinkiehappy:

A very nice start. I would suggest to keep writing. For the meantime, I will follow this fiction with great interest.

Can I just say ..... Wow
I have never read something so good seriously . You have a talent and I hope you do a lot more x
Btw if anyone would like to help me with my fanfic please just send me a message thank you x btw if you don't mind helpIng me then that will be awesome :)
Keep up the good work

DAW :rainbowkiss:
But if this is inspired from the PMV, I trust you're going to add a third character to "compete" with Spitfire?

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