Chapter Twelve
Ask not, the sun, why she sets,
Why she shrouds her light away
Or why she hides her golden gaze
When night turns crimson gold to grey
Silent, falls the guilty sun
As day to dark does turn
One simple truth she dare not speak
Her light can only blind and burn
No mercy for the guilty
Bring down their lying sun
Blood, so silver, black by night
Upon their faces, palest white
Cruel moon bring the end
The dawn will never rise again.
The night time moon, quick to ascend
No more sun, she can’t contend
Stars will light the traveler's path
Before the sun may share her wrath
Time has come to soothe thy pain
The dawn will never rise again
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Oh you... reworking diana's song.
1827374 I thought it appropriate, How could I resist adding my own spin to a beautiful song, which fits somewhat with what I plan to do
Interesting.
1827375
A beautiful song. At first I was so happy to see a new chapter, then I was disappointed to see the word-count for this chapter. We demand MOAR!!!
Please? 
1827469 Analyse the poem just a tad. You'll get more soon.
NMM Time!
1827545 No
I lol at your LoL reference, if that makes much sense.
1827374
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Is this going to turn into a TwiLunaLestia Love Triangle with Celestia being the Silent third corner having repressed her feelings for her student?
...
Not sure if do not want or gusta.
Just wondering, why not as a blog post? Unless it will tie into the story.....
Now that you have used your time to re-write a poem from LoL to Pony, how about working on an actual chapter? :D
1829571 Yes I am
1829833
Yay!
...I can't for the life of me remember what this fic is about xD
1829968 That's when I lose them as a reader, because they don't see anything worth anything in the story
1829973
What do you mean?
It's not like I don't think the fic is worth reading... I just can't remember what it's about because I read a metric ton of fanfics
I wouldn't have favourited this if I didn't like it ya know
This was not as straight forward as last chapters Twilight/Luna cuddling but it is still good (even though most poetry goes straight over my head
).
Why do i feel like this poem is forshadowing something really bad?
1857576
uhh ohh something bads on its way
1857990 Glad you liked it
Ooooh danm
Very interesting story ^.^ keeps me reading! Can't wait for your new chapter ^.^ Also I noticed quite a few errors in your story, not huge but just a few misplaced letters. Once again very good story ^.^
1828120 nicely done.
1969378 I think we've all done it =3
is there ever going to be another one plz
nice story great work
Well... that was cryptic as buck...
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so is the story over
2113245 No. Just getting over writers block/depression
2116598 ok thats good
Holy run-on sentence!
2116598
I hope you're feeling better now, its never good when someone is depressed
2134961 Meh. I just can't be asked with this story anymore it seems, which is why the next chapter's gonna be the last
2135204 the next chap is going be the last
lemme guess luna has to go back and twi cant come right?
Haven't read the story yet, but I have to say that that cover photo is excellent! Do you have a source for that?
1828120 this...
this is amazing
1829973 I smell a Diana-lover... Scorn of the moon, Luna. Celestia, the Radiant Dawn... The dawn will never rise again... YOUVE BEEN PLAYING LEAGUE OF LEGENDS.