After buying a Devil Fruit from a man dressed as the Merchant from Resident Evil 4 I find find myself in the frozen north of Equestria, I am the Reaper of the Crystal Empire, and I am the one who brought it to ruin. May god have mercy upon my soul
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Oh now she decides that and everyone is okay with that
Crystal Empire is not hers and they should be fighting for its independence
But of course, be another boring doormat that just follows orders, even orders from those you shouldn't take from
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Are you just going to rag on everything that I write in this fanfiction
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I'm not ragging but pointing out he shouldn't even follow their orders. His loyalty should be to Crystal Empire not Equestria
Just like the Jedi, it's not an act of kindness but one of subtle sadism but a bit less subtle in this case.
So cool
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Ye, death would be a mercy for one who has went through so much pain.
Could you fit Night Sketch in, he's half changling/pegasus, his base form is that of a black Pegasus, with flame like mane/tail, purple eyes, a set of fangs, and a cutie mark depicting a pencil drawing the moon and 3 stars (profile pic for ref.) . The fruit he'd have would be Kanjuro's drawing fruit but actually has a talent for drawing
He just recently found out he was part changling (he was a tad close to Canterlot during the event of the wedding) but has had the fruit for a few years
Could you add in my character Rayla? She is a royal changeling (fine with her being a normal changeling if that doesn't fit your lore.) with long cerulean hair and tail with purple eyes. She wears silver and blue half plate armor with a blue single shoulder cloak over her left shoulder, and she uses a black falchion. The fruit i'd like her to have is the ice-ice fruit. She sees herself as a guardian and helps anyone she can with fighting off pirates.
P.S i have drawn her if you want a picture to go off of.
Um, Celestia? I have a teensy tiny question. WHAT gives YOU the authority to take away the title of King from the ruler of a sovereign nation? And if we’re gonna talking legal and being tried for crimes, then prepare yourself. First of all, even IF you somehow had legal authority here, that would be suspended or even taken away completely by you and your sisters trials before the court of law. “On what charges?” You might ask. Let’s start with Luna. Two words, NIGHTMARE MOON. When she became Nightmare Moon, she tried to MURDER you, so that assault and attempted murder, not to mention heavily damaging government property during the battle. Then there’s the fact that she tried to kill the ruler of a nation, another serious charge. Plotting against the throne is another one as well. And this isn’t even considering charging her for what she would have done. Plunging the planet into eternal night wouldn’t technically be against the law, but she’s still upsetting the natural order of things. She also would have almost certainly killed any who would try to fight back against her in hopes of bringing back the day. And eternal would have destroyed the ecosystem, and as a result caused the economy of every single nation to completely collapse, which could be considered terrorism on a massive scale. And, oh yes, eternal night would have eventually led to the extinction of every single species on the planet, meaning she also has several pending charges of genocide, as well as more regicide charges since every ruler would have died too. And what is her punishment? Besides from her 1,000 years banishment, she came back, tried A SECOND time to do the above listed things, then is still able to retain her title, authority, and is allowed complete freedom. And as for you Celestia, for allowing such a potentially dangerous criminal to roam free you could be charged with negligence of duty, corruption, even conspiracy against the entire world! And what has Sombra done? He succumbed to dark Magic and enslaved the people of one empire, as well as probably several charges that of murder. That it, just the charges of slavery and several murders. And yet Luna got away with so much more TWICE. “But she wasn’t in control of her actions.” You say, but neither was Sombra, and they both succumbed to dark magic, except that the difference is that Luna willingly allowed such things to happen while Sombra had been a much more unwilling participant. Sure his actions were the catalyst for it to happen, but so we’re Lunas. In short, you have absolutely no authority to do this, and if Sombra is on trial, then so should you and your sister for your own crimes. And before I forget, these crimes now include installing a puppet government in an illegal and illegitimate takeover of a sovereign nation to assimilate into Equestria.
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He has a point though, you should read my other comment to see what I mean.
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Don't forget about Discord.
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So I’m on my taplet, so I’ll type tomorrow, but ya, that’s a humongous story.
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With all due respect, but he isn't wrong as well as a few others here. I do get that your goal was to get past that joint asap and write something actually interesting, but it looks as strong as you wrote it. That scene literally falls apart just from looking funny at it. You did really lazy there and I'm positive you know it as well.
I recommend to accept critique as long as it's fair. That and practice are the only ways to get better. I wonder, what do you feel when looking at that scene today. Would you write it the same?
MC is a simp doormat why you even have powers?
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