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Glida with her friends decided to make a joke on Fluttershy. She kidnapped her and left in Los Santos city.
Fluttershy was completely lost and sad, but she suddenly found help from the angriest guy in the world.

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Comments ( 16 )

more. all I have to say is more. don't let this die like all trevor stories do

One thing for sure for Gilda, Lighting Dust and Suri in sen Fluttershy to Los Santos

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No worries, I will finish it.

Somehow Fluttershy is able to be used for Trevor's irreverent actions, but in some point, this will turn up in a Massacre of three dead teenager

Will be interesting if you add Trevor's heist but with Fluttershy

you had my curiosity, now you have my attention

"Yeah, I know his story. Anyway, listen to me. You think that everything is peaceful and when you see something bad, you are trying to fix this. But girl, you can't repair everything. Some things can't be fixed. You need to accept it or you will end up on the cemetery or asylum," said Lester. Fluttershy wiped out tears from her eyes and said:

Probably the most accurate life lesson in the world

your story is good but some of the words are not right.

Old good shotgun ?

Do you mean Good old shotgun ?

About the dead of the Merryweather founder it's a little off place, since in the original he call Trevor, Franklin and Michael about he was praised for the dead of Devin in the final mission, and he not put charge against all of them (even Trevor)

Also look like the FIB are now in the hunt of the entire events of Equestria Girls and I feel bad for Devin right now

What’s going to happen next?

So is it more or it's end ?

This needs some serious grammar checking but having fun so far.

Me and a friend joked about this existing.

Never be surprised by the internet, folks. In all seriousness, this fanfic was... decent. Certainly a lot less cringe than I was expecting, but it's mainly the grammar mistakes (I'm assuming you're Russian or in that area, so it's understandable) and the plot convenience. With a bit more proofreading and maybe a rewrite here and there, this has potential. At least you didn't turn Trevor into a pony, or just restate the GTA V storyline with ponies.

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