• Member Since 26th May, 2012
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Inferno demon Dash


Showing you the darker, more realistic side of MLP in my writing. Smoking, swearing and being a bastard, but that's nothing new with me. Got a cigarette?

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She’s not the mare she used to be. With the events that transpired it’s unlikely she ever will be again. She’s labeled as a monster; the Mare of Carnage, the Pony of Flames, the Fallen Pegasus. She’s trying to redeem herself from her sins. But some ponies are simply beyond redemption.

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Comments ( 16 )

Good to see you writing

10171419
Thanks old friend. Hope you ernkoyed the story.

It's a pretty good idea and might go far as a story. The only things that I would recommend would be less to no drugs and zero language(or at least substitutes). Again good read and hope to see more!

10171756
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. Might flesh it out in the coming months maybe. Yeah, it's a Teen going to mature story if it gets fleshed out. You got the wrong author if you're looking for a feel good story with a happy ending my friend lol.

1. How do I get more of Mare of War?

2. At what point might she inherit an ice ax?

10171802
Might make a full story if enough people like it. And she won't, Pinkie on the other hoof.

But Pinkie's not our Kratos in this. ...actually, I was honestly expecting Flutters to have gotten the true Blades of Chaos...and perhaps, for some reason, it was through Discord.

10172331
It's not meant to be God of War. I just like the chain blades. And I had an idea like that with Lighting Dust and Discord called Not my Sins but I cancelled it.

10172488
Sorry; just when I read about the chain blades my mind went right to "Fluttershy as Kratos".:twilightsheepish:

10177659
So did mine lol. But no she's not the god of war.

10177666
she's the god of peace. much more deadly and a nightmare to face in combat.

10179679
Ironic since she kills gods then lol.

10179770
not really. unlike war which starts fights for the porpose of having another fight to fight in, a god of peace ends fights as fast as possible to minimize death.

i always viewed that gods of peace will forever be stronger then gods of wars given that peace always wins out in the end, no matter what.

10179784
I like that idea. And I, just like how I like to imagine Fluutershy am an atheist. But no, she is mortal in this. Maybe I'll add that idea for a minor thought if I flesh out this story.

10179790
even the gods can be killed if they must take on mortal form to hang around us mortals.

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