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If this is what it means to be a fool, I don't wish to be anything else.

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Twilight wanted to relax. Really, she did! She had been trying to relax for her entire life and when it finally looked like a day off was within reach... Rarity started glowing. Like, actually glowing. And Twilight's the only one that can see it! So it falls to her, of course, to take care of things as quickly as possible.

Editing done by the ever capable and endlessly delightful wishcometrue, to whom I owe both this fics creation and my life. She can do no wrong. Cover art credit of Tumblr user cutecherryblossom.

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Comments ( 7 )

This was cute! :twilightsmile::raritywink:

Raritwi wins again!

Really cute story. I wonder what's the story of those lip prints in Twilight's memories :twilightoops::raritywink:
It was interesting seeing this portrayal of Twilight's hang ups and how Rarity is able to deal with them, even if she does get frustrated.

This is some amazing Rarity/Twilight dynamics. Always great to see how the two of them would interact and make for a couple that supports each other, and the portrayal of their friendship turning into something more was great.

I really liked this story. It's interesting to see this dynamic from Twilight's perspective.
I'm actually curious about your writing process: Do you start with a song that you want to base your story on or do you get ideas for stories when listening to music? (Or maybe something else, idk.)

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its the latter! when im listening to a song, pony ideas come into my head and i cant help but hold onto em. for What Is The Light, i knew i wanted to do something romantic and ended up on raritwi because of an event a server im in was running

Nice story with a lovely declaration.

I'm curious about Rarity's perspective. If you look at it, Rarity doesn't see a halo of light around Twilight. It probably mean she is not as enamoured with Twilight as Twilight is with her.

It makes me feel like Rarity agreed to date Twilight out of curiosity. And that's fine! They started as friend so they already have a good chemistry. Rarity might want to try to deepen their bond and mayyyybe see the same light around Twilight someday.

Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that I wouldn't mind to see another chapter focus on Rarity's side of things.

You deserve a like :)

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