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Legends from Apex games suddenly got into the strange world. Now they are trying to come back. But that would be difficult, if instead of hands they have hooves.

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Nice of course mirage would freak out first

Oh man I was hoping pathfinder was going to be a pegasus. Oh well he will fit in trying to make friends.

To Master of Ice.

But Pathfinder still have his hook so he can grab clouds with it.

Even better all right this is goign to be good.

Ok that took a dark turn but hey your story alternate universe.... oh no I just realized about caustic and
Revenant of who there going to meet. Pinkie pie oh boy this might be interesting I think they will be very annoyed by her in the frist 0.5 seconds they she her. Oh well have fun you two.

Ha ha called it. Pinkie would annoy Revenant fast.

Apex LEGENDS!!! I love it, butt u need to go get a proof reader. There's some miss spellings and some broken contexts that can be rearranged. Over all good work.

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Thanks for telling me. I will work on it

Revenant will have fun he should be the kill leader at this point.

Oof, if English isn't your first language it's somewhat fine, just put it through Google Translate, but if you truly do speak English as your main language you really need to step it up on grammar. I have been waiting for an Apex Legends fic but this isn't fun to read at times.

No one save when crypto is having his drone out. Also "we have ours a new kill leader" "Heh, I have appointed a new kill leader. I like that."

Applejack grabbed the rock and threw it to the device. Suddenly the thunder appeared from the robot and hit the rock. After that rock became a pile of ashes.

Not thunder, lightning. Also, rocks don't burn, it would melt or explode. Wattson's Ultimate is not a robot, it's just a gadget.

What? Why? Caustic is a scientist. He's a psycho but smart enough to hold back anger on something as petty as a shove. I know everyone on this site hates Gilda to some degree but just killing her like that is unnecessary and weird. Applejack and Fluttershy would've done something about it. Applejack would try to fight him and Fluttershy would have run and told someone. So for future reference, Caustic is insane and likes watching people die, but he is patient and calculated so small annoyances aren't a problem for him.

"I don't care about your reason for changing gender. Keep it to yourself."

*snirk* That is actually pretty funny :twilightsheepish:

Wait so the legends have shields and if they do what level

How they can see Revenant's and especially Pathfinder's (because he was a robot from the beginning) memories?
You can't just throw "because of magic" , especially with them when they aren't organic and in some sense alive, so magic can't just happen

Mybe be cause of mirage I cant say his name right. Maybe they saw him talking to pathfinder and path fider told him about his journey to find his crater. Revent is a cyborg I think so part of his mind is in there.

I like the idea but, the ponies are too accrpting in the beginning, especially when Caustic killed someone i would imagine them having more shock

"Hi." She turned around and saw alicorn.

Unicorn

"Scootaloo was shocked by Crypto's past. That was explaining why he was very hideous.

I'm pretty sure" hideous" is not the right word

"It's very fascinating. Can you please tell us the recipe for this liquid?"
"Of course, but I need a lab."
"No worries, we have a lab in the hospital. Come with me." With those words, both mares headed to the hospital. Soon they entered the hospital. They approached the lab.
"Now I need ingredients," said Lifeline. She wrote something on the paper and gave it to the nurse. She read it and nodded. After a few minutes, she came back with all ingredients.
"Now, it's cook time!" With those words, Lifeline began showing to Redheart the process of cooking.

You can't create something like that in a primitive lab, you need machines
Especially if some ingredients don't exist in this world or need to be manufactured by machines or both, etc

Alright 3 things first I ship octane and rainbow bite me 2 how are you gonna bring Loba into this and 3 who's ultamates work and who's don't

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3. Gibraltar, Bangalore and Lifeline's ultimates doesn't work because Lifeline's ultimate is an airdrop from the ship, while Gibraltar and Bangalore's ultimates are bombardment from the ship again.

2. Loba will be in the second part.

In a world where mirage is actually a good pick for ranked

The wording of the story is really weird like saying the character's descriptions after they first talk, and there's ALOT of grammar errors (i'm one to talk.) although i'm sure other than that, this is/will be a great story.

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"We have ours a new kill leader."😆
U get a B for effort

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Not to forget the broken English.

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If the scary murder bot doesn't want to say thank you, scary murder bot doesn't have to:twilightsmile:. Please don't kill me :twilightoops:

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