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Doom Trot


Like 2017 could possibly be worse.

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After keeping their secret so carefully hidden for so long, the cat is is officially out of the bag on Applejack and Rainbow Dash when Spike just happens to wind up at the wrong place at the wrong time. Exposed and ashamed, Applejack and Rainbow Dash try to duck out of the public eye as the news spreads like wildfire.

(Possible spoilers in comments, read at your own risk)

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 121 )

FIRST!

I would like "MOAR", as they say :ajsmug:

Oooh, that Diamond Tiara and that Silver Spoon. I hope they get their comeuppance! Pair of bitches.

This story looks promising. Can't wait to see more. :twilightsmile:

something tells me its not what we think it is :rainbowwild:

One can only guess what they did. :applejackconfused:

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are biting off more than they can chew me thinks.

I know exactly what's going on here.... but do they? :rainbowderp:
It involves some.. interesting 'playthings'. I'll leave it at that.
Anyway, I'll be following this story. :rainbowkiss:

Pretty good, worth a fav and like.
good job!:pinkiehappy:

Following this :P

Well. I'm pretty damn sure it's drugs.

I look forward to reading more! :rainbowlaugh:

I sense that shenanigans are afoot.

Diamond Tiara why?!?!


wait.....that didnt sound right

WHAT. IS. IT.?!
As a curious person, the suspense is killing me xD
Hope to see the next chapter up soon (or what they were doing). I seriously have no clue so GAHHH. :twilightoops:

This story disturbs me, probably because I doubt Spike would be homophobic. Other than that... it's decent. I guess.

I can only guess what the items were. :derpytongue2:

They were reading romance novels.

GGAH! I KNOW THE AUTHOR AND HE WON'T TELL ME WHAT'S HAPPENING!! :flutterrage:

Ooh. Another story with Silver in the closet. Nice.

Nice :D following this

Diamond Tiara= Kill it with fire.

I figured it out in the transition between chapters. Certain clues in this chapter confirmed it for me.

Also, Spike isn't that big of a jerk, but for the purposes of this narrative I guess he kinda has to be. Looking forward to see how this gets wrapped up. I wonder if we're gonna get some more intimate details of Dash and AJ's "sessions". :rainbowkiss::ajsmug:

WHAT is happening?! ARGG
Either way, loving the story so far and can't wait to read more :ajsmug:

1182636 Ooooh. Details you shall receive. :raritywink:

I have no bucking idea what they are doing!! I must find out soon!! :flutterrage:

How.. How has this not gotten featured yet?

1208901 Answer: I'm not a AAA writer. :ajbemused: This is the first marginally popular thing I've ever put on FiMfiction.

Diamond tiara è.é

I love this! BTW, what's Pinkie's social secret?? :pinkiecrazy:

Hats are stetsons, high heels/knives are stilletos
Sorry. Pet peeve.keep the chapter coming though

1224913 I knew I had something wrong. :facehoof: Thank you very much. :twilightsmile:

Am I overdoing Applejack and Applebloom's accents? :applejackconfused: Somebody please tell me if I am.

1250674 I dun Think so. It's easy to imagine their voices

I think the accents are fine, you might not need the "'t," and you could probably put "it"

I don't think you're overdoing it. (I've been a little more restrained, but only a little.)

Not bad at all, I can imagine it.
Seriously though, WHAT DID AJ AND RD DO?!?! :ajbemused:

1250727>>1250789>>1250866>>1250955 Okay, just had to make sure they sounded okay. I will more carefully consider the "it > 't" thing. :ajsmug: And worry not, Jake8765. All shall be revealed!

1250969 the t and it thing i could agree with as your saying

1250969 Thank Celestia there's no Romance tag! They didn't...do it...right? :rainbowderp:

1251036 :rainbowlaugh::ajsmug: Patience. All shall be revealed. All shall be revealed! (Later)

"Who knocks on a barn door?"
Sometimes the little throwaway lines are the funniest.
There's some good interaction here between sisters and friends in this chapter.

1250674
Accentwise, it looks fine; but you are misconjugating a word in a couple places. "Y'all" is only used when addressing a small group of people, not one singular person pony. But when it's a large group, it becomes "all y'all".
and there's your useless Southern grammar lesson of the day.

1251045
Then write faster or I shall END YOU! :flutterrage:

1252070 My Southern is a bit rusty, so the refresher is much appreciated. The misconjugation stemmed from misplaced emphasis, and is now fixed.

1252365 :fluttershyouch: Okay, I'll hurry, just please don't hurt me.

1254628
Flutterrage has been sated. But AngryTwi is keeping an eye on you! :twilightangry2:

Bleh. This chapter is probably a big disappointment for such a long wait. For that, I'm sorry. :pinkiesad2: I would have had it finished sooner, but I decided to rewrite the first version, and it sorta got muddled from there. :ajsleepy:

1294953 Well, he's a part of an angry mob. An angry mob spurred on by the lies of the local grade school bully. Suffice to say he isn't super duper intelligent. :derpytongue2:

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