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Twilight Sparkle had planned a sleep-over for weeks, a camp out with her five best friends: Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Rarity. However, a rainstorm compromises her avid plans, but, to laugh in the face of such boredom, Twilight pulls a wild card: ‘E-Questria: Dungeons Are Magic.’
“Dungeons? AND Magic? Now that sounds totally awesome!” –Rainbow Dash.
“It all seems a bit... barbaric.” –Rarity.
“...more like fun! I love fun things! This one time, I...” –Pinkie Pie.
'Welcome to a beautifully illustrated multi-player fantasy role playing game! Immerse yourself in the wonders of E-Questria with the main quest: ‘Corruption,’ a feature-length adventure where the players traverse across the planes of E-Questria in order to restore peace and harmony to the throne once more.
Shadow-sparkle, a corrupted shadow mage has rebelled against the kingdom, defeating the mighty trio of power atop the throne of worlds, attaining the status of high ruler across all of E-Questria. The mage has plunged the lands into chaos and dis-harmony, and the only hope to rejuvenate this taint is a small star-aligned group of truly legendary figures, their destiny to stop the unrelenting force and raise a new leader, a leader who is worthy of the throne.'
Read along as the group of friends delve deep into the fantasy realm of E-Questria, and grasp a wonderfully narrated and expressed storyline from the ponies themselves, catching in on the full story both in and out of character.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 5 )

Question: Why don't you put every chapter into it's appropriate position, as a seperate chapter?
Or are they sub-chapters, like game chapters within the actual story?

And the perfect ending: Twilight, enraged by the ensuing arguement that formed around Rainbow Dash's sorrowful defeat; calls out the words: "Rocks fall-" ("No,don't do it!") Dash cries. ("Do what?") Rarity asks, confused and afraid, "-Everyone dies!"

"Noooooo!" Rainbow screams in anguished pain.

Pinkie who was as confused as anything tilts her head. "What just happened?"

"The games over Pinkie, we lost." Bowing her head shamefully, Dash huddles down and whimpers.

Fluttershy acts accordingly and comforts Dash while Rarity and Applejack resume their dispute. Twilight, who's apparent reign of power ended the game, fails to grasp the attention of her friends. That's it..."
Dear Princess Celestia, can you please do me a favour?

Moments Later: ...
"The moon, are you serious?!"

-End-

Actually, that kind of sucked. Anyway, have fun writing more fellow Brony!
Love and Tolerance from NZ! :pinkiehappy:

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Well, I thought adding each chapter as it's own would be a bit short, and, seeing the average number of words per-chapter on other fics, i decided to group the chapters, so I guess they could be like game chapters.

I posted this on here because, I didn't know if it was any good, or if anyone liked it. Also, I tend to stop writing half way through fics either because I get bored and/or I run out of ideas, I was pretty much making it up as I wrote. I shall take your suggestion into account and it sure has given me some ideas of my own, thanks!

I can't give any ideas on when I will update this, I tend to be a leisurely writer, but I will try and get a bit more up soon!

Once again, thank you.

Well now, when did it become September? I do not recall such a thing happening. Anyway, this chapter; like your others was great! :pinkiehappy: I also like the fact that Pinkie willingly and openly admits that for the very reason she's Pinkie, she can break the laws of physics. That's cool! I had a good laugh with the "(Metaphorically of course!)", couldn't laugh too loud though. Rarity seems like she's dominating the game, even if Twilight's the rules master. She also seems the most equiped when it comes to combat, since the battle is decided with words, and to be honest, I thought Dash would be the one coming up with super slick moves to pwn everyone up! Thanks for the update bro, it was once again: a good read and keep on writing. :eeyup:

EDIT: Wait, I just missed the Rainbow Dash reminisce. Things just got real.

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Jeez, September? When did that happen? :derpyderp2:
I tried to depict the characters in the most accurate way as possible, however they ended up being much more... dramatic and potent than normal- that lets me make so much more material! It's great to know that you find it funny too! I really was wondering whether to keep the 'Comedy' tag up on this.
Don't worry, Dash will have her prime- She's just getting started.

As always, updates should come soon :twilightsmile:.
Thanks for driving me forward :pinkiehappy:.

New format- note that previous chapters are being revised and will NOT need re-reading if already explored, unless of course you happened to completely misunderstand said chapter/s, therefore there may be a chance that you do understand thanks for reading (to any-and-everyone, :ajsmug:) you rock, woohoo. :yay:

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