When Twilight attempts to expand her repertoire of magic, she gets more than she bargained for when she ends up switching Spike and Princess Cadence's minds, with serious repercussions should anypony find out. Between helping the Crystal Empire, helping the Magic Of Friendship spread through Equestria, and keeping Shining Armour and Flurry Heart happy, and finding a way to reverse the spell, the trio has more to worry about than ever before thanks to Twilight's recklessness.
Wish them luck.
The good ole switcheroo
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What you think so far? I was racking my brain seeing if this was going to be a good idea.
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I think you'll have to get very creative to break the usual "Freaky Friday" mould. Body/mind swaps are a common trope now, so the most interesting thing coming from this concept would be the characters themselves. I would like to see more situations that Spike/Cadence end up in that could only have ever happened to them.
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In that case, just stay tuned, I have a few ideas, I'm sure I can turn things around and bring a fresh perspective to this troupe.
To quote Johnny Cage: "That's freaky like Friday!"
The first section of this chapter is unnecessary and could easily be used in the description.
Cadence's first section flip-flops between past and present tense, sometimes in the same sentence.
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Not gonna lie, when I saw the title I was reminded of a nsfw comic I’m reading where spike gets turned into a female, becomes dragon princess and is the happiest they’ve ever been
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Sorry if I got your hopes up but maybe you might like this story when more chapters get published.
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Ehhh, not really one to read body swapping stories. I’m sure it’s a great story though!
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If you would like a link to the comic, I’ll message it to you. Just keep in mind it IS nsfw
I hope there is more chapters on this your the guy of rising hope!!!!!!!!!! of course the next chapters are going to be inspiring... I'm about to reread all of your stories again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I’ll try my best. I have plenty of ideas lined up for my next chapters
The worst is that you're stuck this way...
uh huh... Hey Twi -- how would you feel if you were suddenly in love with a volcano?
Ohhh never say that because that's just tempting faith 😥
Whoa wait a minute the Golden Oak Library and Twilight is a unicorn something tells me this is during the time in season 3 right
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Wait what Flurry heart is here while the Golden Oak Library still there and Twilight is a unicorn still is this like an alternate universe or something im Confuse
Yeah we remember that she went totally insane it was crazy lol
Whoa so this is going to be like one of those Freaky Friday stories cool so basically Princess Cadence is having her stressful back at the Crystal Empire dealing with ponies with the problems and probably having some arguments with shining armor and then Spike felt like he's being unappreciated for what he does although it felt like the same what Cadence has was saying as well but something wrong with the spell and switch both Cadence and spike minds oh boy I wonder how this will work in this Freaky Friday
Oh boy thats not good Twilight you should have known that this kind of magic if you don't understand how this works you shouldn't mess with it I mean look what happened the last time that happened when you switch the Cutie Marks of your friends and it's going to take her this long to figure out how to put there mines switch place boy this is going to be a long day for spike and Cadence Can't wait to see how this works out
They could be stuck the way they are now, Twilight? That's a big problem!
Is this story going to continue on
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Yes it will don’t worry. Just going over my other stories but I will be posting a chapter on Thursday
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Oh ok got it
Ok so basically they had to learn from each other how to do things how the other ones do which that's going to be very hard for both of them oh Twilight you messed up big time I mean I'm sure she'll figure it out I can't wait to see how it works out
So now they can't even tell anyone, even if the spell might be permanent?
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Boy that makes thing more difficult 😥
10538938 Not being able to enlist the help of Shining Armor or the royal sisters complicates matters, Shining especially since he might have been able to help provide "Cadence" with cover.
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Not only that things will get very awkward between Shining Armor and "Cadence" oh boy 😳
Roll credits!
But in all seriousness, this is a bit of a problem all right. Though I suppose it does give much better justification as to why they'd want to keep what happened secret at all than they'd had up until now, so...for the story's sake, I guess that's a plus.
Let's hope it doesn't go any further than the kissing, first off...
Okay so far nothing really happening just only Spike and Cadence are trying to figure out how to manage the Crystal Empire while spike is still Cadence and taking care of flurry heart and without shining armor getting suspicious even though he should be on board to help them out so it won't be any more harder than it already is and it won't be too awkward either if you know what I mean while Twilight still trying to figure out how to spell works and everything so with that said I hope they find a way before things got more crazy lol I can't wait to see how this will work out
Oh by the way is this a alternate story because Twilight is a unicorn and the golden old library is still there but yet flurry heart is born so I'm kind of confused is this a alternate storyline or something
You mean it gets worse?! Good grief, just about how much more worse can this get at this point?
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AU, my bad. Forgot to put that in the story , lol.
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You’ll see. It’s gonna be hijinks galore until they get fixed, or will they get fixed?
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You just basically just tempted faith lol oh boy 😅
Ok, I’ve seen that you consistently use Cadence, but that is not the name.
The full name is Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, but it is usually shortened to the nickname Cadance.
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I know, I just literally was not about to try and go through trying to fit in the story, I could do it but it’d be a hassle. Plus the fandom, I would hope everyone knows her as Cadence just because it rolls off the tongue easier. But since you voiced a comment on that, may I ask what you think of the story so far or have you hit read this chapter?
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no what I mean is that it is CadAnce with an A not CadEnce with an E ^^;;;
[I think that is for trademark reasons... you can't trademark a single common word but you CAN a made up one]
For the chapter I'm still reading it got a LOT of things happening today... -__-
either "and a" or "one" (if you use the "and a" remove the comma right before)
was
Hm you get a repetition here, maybe you can replace with "Seems"
This one is just a logistics one... Cadance is TALL, not as tall as Celestia but tall. Spike would struggle to reach the back of a normal pony.
Usually the form of the saying is "wrong only if"
Hm the Mane 6 are debated to be late teen, Cadance is for sure older than that early to mid twenties at a minimum
Small nitpick in order to take off her crown she has to use magic so she lights her horn BEFORE taking off the crown.
I would replace this with "It"
pony, or dragon in your case, won't
Remove this
Either remove or replace with "of his mouth"(but you have to decide HOW you are going to go for the pronouns as now Spike is physically female)
Then... In general you get HUGE phrases full of subordinates and coordinates. I'm guessing that English is not your native language. [Neither is mine] So you should try and shorten the periods cutting the redundancies. You have some of the phrases that go on for three of four lines of text, it really does not flow that well.
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it could be the countermeasure in the spell is fatal if info is leaked...
Twilight should've known not to tempt fate.
CELESTIA DAMNIT TWILIGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW BY NOW TO NEVER EVER SAY THAT LINE!!
Yeah that's why I was trying to say on my last comment this would have been very awkward between Shining Armor and "Cadence" because he doesn't know that Spike inside Cadence body again awkward 😖
Oops Twilight you should never said that now things are going to get crazy now
So apparently Shining armor is still waiting for Cadence to return but little does he not know that Spike and Cadence had a little freaky Friday moment so this is going to be a very interesting situation and it looks like they're on our way to the Crystal Palace and meanwhile at Ponyville Twilight and Pinkie Pie trying to get to the Crystal Empire to fix this but unfortunately there was some delay so they had to use a Kart rail so they can get there saw everything kind of went downhill for them hopefully they will get there in time can't wait to see how this will work out
...probably a little of both.
Don't say that!
Interesting Chatter 1 I give it 10 out 11 And if yor interested I have some ideas for fanfics you mite like to write
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Sure, PM me.
Nice reference dude lol
Well then that was something so it looks like Cadence and Spike finally made it to the Crystal Empire and it looks like Shining Armor is out like a light after taking care of flurry heart but it looks like flurry heart got too excited and almost knocking down both "Cadence" and flurry off the castle luckily for wings and the lettuce cart caught the fall and yeah I know the reference so now I wonder how things will go and hopefully Twilight and Pinkie Pie get here soon and fix this mess
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In case you didn’t see or meant the problem actually getting fixed, Twilight and Pinkie are already there. Reread it if you missed it.
Unless you meant them getting to the throne room, which they were both shot out of Pinkie’s cannon in that direction.