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Gamerpony611


Brony, Dragon ball fan, Marvel Fan, and working on writing

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As the earth of universe 7 has been in peace for 7 years Goku had a great life, his wife and he had a son and a friend reunion has been planned for years and Goku was excited to see his old friends. That was until a man with a monkey's tail arrived on earth and threatened to destroy it and saying he is Goku's brother. In the magical land of Equestria, sunset shimmer has had enough of Princess Celestia and has found the magical mirror and has activated it. Before Goku and Raditz died they have been transported to the world of Equestrian girls, now the two rival brothers will have to learn to care for one another or leave each in the dust (Yes the dragon ball characters will be toned down a bit. that will make them all more reasonable and fairer for other characters to not be forgotten)

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So I’ll be honest. As a dragon ball and my little pony fan, I genuinely enjoy this and wonder what plan you have for this story. All I can say is good luck with this story. And make the best colorful characters

Good to see this story is still alive. Can't wait for more!

I read All Four Chapters so far. And I like to have some questions.


Since there in their Teenage Years. Goku/Kakarot and Raditz are a Little Weak. But, are still Strong. So WHAT kind of Dragon Ball Z Arc/Sagas are you putting in your Story?


Will Prince Vegeta and Nappa arrive? Will they Go to the Planet Namek and facing down Lord Frieza and his Army?


Will they face Dr. Gero and his Ribbon Army Androids and even Cell? Even facing Majin Buu, Babidi the Evil Wizard, Dabura, Super Buu, and Kid Buu later on?


Will Movie Villains show up: Turles, Cooler, Movie Broly, Bojack, Android 13/14/15, Janemba, Lord Slug, Dr. Wheelo, Hirudegarn, and Garlic Jr. ?

Will you Have Gohan, Chi Chi, Vegeta ( Good Guy/Anti Hero), Bulma, Piccolo, Krillin, and the rest of the Z Fighters and Friends coming to EQ. Girls World? And helping Goku/Kakarot, and Raditz, along with Befriending the Mane Human 5, Sunset ( Redeem), and Sci Twilight/Spike?


And FINALLY having Goku, Raditz, Vegeta, Gohan, etc. of getting Kaioken, Spirit Bomb, Instant Transmission and the Super Saiyan Forms: SSJ1, Grade 2-4, SSJ2, SSJ3, Maybe even SSJ4 (DB GT) with their Tails!!!

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@OP Omni God Emperor DOOM

Hello i am glad you enjoyed my story but if I mention anything about the future of the story with anyone else i maybe risking surprises or even great events that will or could happen. all i can tell you is just be patient and with due time your questions maybe answered

- Gamerpony

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Thanks. One last thing. Rainbow and Rarity NEEDS to STOP being Paranoid or Hostile to Goku and Raditz. They should APOLOGIZE when they do find out the truth. And Sunset is being FRICKIN STUPID!!! Why is she turning the CHS School's Students against Goku and Raditz??!!


She seen what they are capable off. And while Goku might forgive. Raditz will just give the MOST PAINFUL BEAT DOWN OF HER LIFE! :pinkiecrazy:


Plus, they STAND NEGATIVE 999,999,999,999 chance to face the likes of Vegata, Nappa, and Frieza and his Army later on, WITHOUT Goku and Raditz's help. So they should APOLOGIZE and be Friendly with Goku and Raditz ( And later on the other Z Fighters.)

I really like what your doing honestly really do. And I’m curious how far you’ll go with this story, little nit pick you do repeat certain words. But other then that keep going.

@Celestial King Turles
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In all honestly I have to thank you, when I posted the first part I was worried no one would read it since I seemed to be the first one to bring Raditz into the story and it was very different from “Goku and person b get sent to a equestria girls world and now they have to learn friendship and it’s before the dazzlings and after sunsets reformation.” I felt that was being used over and over and I didn’t know if anyone would feel the same. So when I posted it and it didn’t get as much views or likes as other stories I kinda felt sad that no one seemed to want to read it. So I put it on the bookshelf with stories people may never like. But when I returned to this fic I saw your comment first and that is the spark that reingnited my flame for my story. So thank you. You helped make this happen along with all my other supporters so please enjoy my story and give me more pointers. Now to the reply. Well I can’t spoil much but I will tell you it will have similar arcs to the og story lines from both fandoms, there are androids but it’s not the same, there is a frieza but it has another secret within it. There is a god of destruction but he will be more adapted. And I plan to take this to the point I last saw dragon ball and mlp for dragon ball it would be DBS Broly movie, for mlp it was the season twilight started a new school. As I said, the stories will be different. Thank you for reading this and understanding and thank you for your support. In all honestly I am so glad others like something I wrote! So thanks guys.

I'm bit disappointed with this chapter. I mean Goku and Raditz of all Sayains ALMOST got their butts kicked by two measly jerks from a nasty Martial Arts School that resemble something like the Crane School from Original Dragon Ball. And Cobra Kai from the Karate Kid Series.

Are they really Nerfed or were holding back the whole time. Those stupid bully kids, Sombra, and Sunset WOULDN'T last a couple of Seconds against Saibarmen of all things. VERY Much less against Prince Vegeta, Nappa, Lord Frieza, his Ginyu Force, and Army.


Please, hope they get REALLY Strong with their Zenkai.

Op Omni God Emporer Doom
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They are both nerfed and holding back, if you realize they were not using energy blast which is a adargar giver in a few episodes. The Shadow Crystal clan is a bit of cobra KAI, (hence the name Sensei Cobra) and the craneo school. I am kinda using the kid Gokus power level as I go through the story. I will making them stronger but with all good things patience is key, once they return to the dragon ball world, you will see them to their strength.

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I just DON'T like Nerfing on Badass Overpowered Characters like Dragon Ball/Z/GT/Super For example. And I did say that the Shadow Crystal Clan reminds me of the Crane School in the Original Dragon Ball. And Cobra Kai in the Karate Kid Movies and T.V. Series.


But, I really like to see Sunset, Human 5/Rainbooms, Mai, CHS Students, the Dazzlings, Crystal Prep, Shadowbolts, Sombra, Phoenix, and Wind Striker's Faces, when they will DROP THEIR JAWS, and Pissed/Pooped their Pants on seeing the TRUE SAIYAN STRENGTH and POWER!!! Plus the Terrifying and Horrible might of Frieza, his Frieza Force and Cold Family, Dr. Gero and the Androids, Cell, Majin Buu, etc.. :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowlaugh:

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@OP Omni God Emperor DOOM

Well sorry but that power might come in later, for now this is the dragon ball point. Goku is as strong as he once was as a kid. They will both grow and become stronger but in all honestly. Goku didn’t become the strongest in the universe in a day. He was a weak saiyan and grew upon the ranks of gods. I understand that you may not like this but believe me when we do get to it the wait would be worth it.

-Gamerpony611

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