• Member Since 31st Mar, 2016
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Mark Britton


Things are stranger than they seem.

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When ponies talk in groups, you can never quite make out what they're saying. Follow them around and you'll notice they follow very specific patterns. It's the same thing, day in and day out. It never rains unless the entire town is depressed. The weather is controlled, there are no criminals or existential threats. There's never any sadness that isn't fixed after a half hour of talking. No conflict left unresolved.

I've noticed all this in a week. And the more I look, the more I feel like I'm slipping into madness.

This place isn't real.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 7 )

Oh my goodness! I love this story! The conflict is really interesting. :pinkiesmile:

This story is amazing. Looking forward to more

Ah, yes, agreed. A story where the conflict is having no conflict.. Welp, looks like I'll be staying here for a while..

I'm super excited on how this story will play out. Very rarely are there how with realistic elements such as this. The fact that Equestria is a cartoon and many thing in it doesn't reflect real life would definitely mess someone up. Voice actors who never stumble on their lines, bad things happening only to push forward a plot. This idea is genius!

A conflict where the protagonist is studying the timing and science of conflicts! He studies the meta-conflicts making this a story about meta-meta-conflicts! BRILLIANT!

meta... is he gonna become fully selfaware and realize he is in a fic if so i pity him.

if he does realize that wont he become some kind of god (eg, plot conviniancing himself stuff), or will he go insane with the realization that everything is fake and nothing matters. will some obligitory arc come where the main 6 say "we're your friends and etc" what would happen if he rejects the ending, how will he and the characters act.

so many possibilitys so much potential i wonder where this story will go

I can't wait for more! :raritystarry:

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