Displaced
Dodge formerly Lucas J. Matchstick
Who had been cosplaying as Lucas Caravaggio from Locke and Key
Please make comments I love to hear what people think of my story
(Token: music box and a key)
Token
🎵Who ever Should turns the key🎵
🎵Through the void I’ll come to thee🎵
🎵If power or fortune you seek🎵
🎵Then Death and misfortune you’ll reap🎵
🎵But, if power and fortune you despise🎵
🎵Then Fate smiles with yellow cat’s eyes 🎵
🎵Death and Destruction You would wish🎵
🎵Then your Death will be as of a fish🎵
🎵Now heed then the warning 🎵
🎵And do not disguise 🎵
🎵nothing can run 🎵
🎵from THE ONE OF CAT’S EYES🎵
Available for crossovers.
Chapters (18)
Please get an editor, also make you're chapters LONGER then 300 words please and make this a actual story
10174915
You’re right your way and I’ll right mine.
10174917
By the way, I like it but it really feels rushed, along with that longest chapter had 507 words, try making it longer, slow it down a little, anywho, look forward to next chapter
10174939
Thank you
10197030
You're welcome
This summery needs work, it is not even a summery. I wanted to see if this story would interest me but the summery tells me nothing!!
*reads summary*
What the fuck is Locke and Key?
*Googles "Locke and Key"*
...What the fuck is Locke and Key?
It’s a comic series made by the son of Stephen King
Nope
Trying to keep to genre that Dodge’s character come from, okay?
Love it! but you should really download a grammer correcting app because you grammer mistakes keep on ruining the effect of the story.
Good!
Like the ending of our cross over!
What I’ve always wanted to do that in a story.
This is just stupid
10489704
No, it is just not your cup of tea.
Why would celestia banish children
10489832
Why not?
10174917
You right your way and I’ll right mine way.
To everyone wondering moonghost and dodge are participating in a multi author fic with me and 2 others so far hence the bizarreness of him leaving a reality
Lol definitely needed a few edits for this but it was fun working with you on it
10326109
That’s the point
Anyone seeing this is the final version to the chapter
this is confusing why are they casually talking in front of Celestia when in the first chapter Celestia and MC was enemies. now it seems like there has been no problem at all.
This whole chapter is so confusing.
Hey, so bit of an FYI from the guy that made the Anziek. They don't have a home dimension any longer because they destroyed it. Please look at the lore of the Anziek for more information.
10871983
Facepaws I just pm them that
10174915
You know how would you like it if someone said that story that you have put months into wasn’t a story.
Go ahead Do tell why you think my story is bad
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10489704
No it's just too abrupt without any explanation.
Wait Celestia was still in the room right?