When Luster Dawn tries to cast a spell to impress Princess Twilight, it goes awry, and she finds her self cast into an alternate Equestria that is both colorful and terrifying. An Equestria where Canterlot stretches beyond the horizon and the mountain itself has become a castle.
Now she needs to find a way home with her terrible social skills, and the only ones capable of helping her are a strange, gigantic bird and a grumpy, elderly sorcerer stallion.
Thanks to Kryostasis for spotting errors and typos and showing them to me.
I wrote a story after 2 years in place of what was meant to be my hundredth. Fail me not, will.
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What do you mean by that?
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What do I mean by what?
These aren't pony names, so what are they?
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Who knows? Nicknames, perhaps. And Merangue was a typo. I meant to write Meringue. That's a type of cookie.
Couple typos here and there, but otherwise, I'm glad you're getting the opportunity to capitalize on this premise. Looking forward to the future!
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I'm halfway finished with chapter two at the moment.
Fucking cliff hanger motherfucker I was reading that. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
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i.imgur.com/3irtZGr.jpg
WHO IS THAT?
Well, atleast they're still avatars so it's not so much heresy as it is simply different from the norm. This is fine, this is okay, I like this king and queen.
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Redduflarru
But yes, I agree. They are certainly an interesting twist on the 'rulers of Equestria and masters of sun and moon'-schtick.
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They're also better than the originals :3
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YA JUST CUT OFF RIGHT THERE? JFC, what am I spoised to do now...?
Interesting they have a Colosseum
I need more
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Alrighty. Lemme finish the chapter. Should be a few minutes, if I can focus.
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What do you mean by writing a story after 2 years in place of what was meant to be my hundredth. Did you mean this story was mean to be your hundredth story?
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The third Psychopath story was meant to be my hundredth.
I mean, I can delete or unpublish one of the stories I abandoned long ago (The ones from 2012. Not onward) and that would leave me at 99 again.
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Thar ye be.
I still can't imagine what BasKas looks like and with how much he talks he's so confusing, but other than that, is gud chapter.
MOAR