Celestia gets fed up with Prince Blueblood's whining and lazy attitude, so she comes up with a perfect way to show him what hard work is all about. Turned into a common Earth Pony, Blueblood is sent to live with the Apple family in Ponyville until he learns what hard work is all about, and along the way, he may just find true love as well.
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This shows promise.
How does yaoi find itself in a place with 99.9% females
. Well written, though. Like
YEEEESSSS!
Sorry about that.. I just like to see Blueblood get what he deserves. Anyway, very nicely written, didn't see any errors that stood out. You have erned a thumb from me.
According to google, pallid means:
(of a person's face) Pale, typically because of poor health.
Feeble or insipid.
Not really a proper adjective to describe something he's proud of. Maybe platinum would work, since he might have something to do with that family. Or snowy?
What on earth do they expect him to do, though? I'd rather he wasn't a little privileged brat, but he doesn't really serve any useful purpose in society. What good is a unicorn prince when you now have two alicorn princesses? It's a neat idea.
Don't make thing too easy for Celestia either.
Even if her nephew learns his lesson, each and every humiliation will have been her fault, directly or indirectly; it would make sense if she had to work to regain his trust after this stunt, especially since Blueblood seems to be the sort of guy who's prone to hold a grudge.
"his loafing around and spending more time chasing colts than doing his royal duties"
Blue-Blood is gay? So this is a BlueMac story... Interesting.
Yes, it will be Blue/Mac fic. It is of my opinion that the reason Blueblood snubbed Rarity was because a) he doesn't like gold-diggers and b) he doesn't like mares. XD Don't get me wrong, I like Rarity, but need more yaoi in ponies.
Please continue the story! It's too good to stop!