A changeling in the bathroom mirror, an interdimensional storm, and having to learn a new set of hardware. Not exactly a great day for Mike. Maybe not the worst, but not great either. The ponies running around with single letter code names cleaning up the storm's mess may pose a problem too.
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Light comedy, transformation, action, little serious at one bit, and plays around with the MiB idea a bit. Was to set the stage for the next two parts (but we'll see how this goes).
This is a very interesting story. I am interested in how the alphabet agents react to Mike/Pinea.
Kinda weird that this doesn't have many likes or comments, it's really good!
This is so good!
Why so little views?